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Feb
10th
2017

Love beats Stupid first impressions · 4:14am Feb 10th, 2017

I would’ve rathered going to the orchestra.

I agree I love orchestra music over one direction. So Aria and Sonata together as a couple? I’ll bite.

So will they Aria seems into it.

Why wouldn’t she be interested?

Never said there was anything wrong with that. So you’re thoughts on one of Chillbook’s finest pieces?

I'm hooked. The story so far(3 chapters in) is really well written and the pacing is almost spot on. It feels a little rushed, but that might change as the story goes on.

That changes slightly seeing as I just finished story today. It gets better the ending tore my You said we were going to read it together.

But it was good and had such beautiful storytelling. There’s actually even some great moments with Adagio.

Don't you dare say anything or else. But you are right about the storytelling, the story is done with the right of amounts of show and not tell and telling instead of showing.

So should we jump into a summary of the first three chapters?

Still haven't mastered the art of subtlety. But yes let's get to it. The story start with quick recap of who the sirens are and how they got together. Then it leads into the age old questionWhat’s for dinner?

You can make your own dinner, and don't tell me that you can’t cook. Because I know you can. But yes that is how Love Beats Stupid starts.

You say I haven’t mastered the art of subtlety. But I say I can live without it. Ya’ know why?!

No, but you're going to tell me anyways. But the story does give us a cute Image of Sonata sitting on Aria’s lap. Then mood is quickly killed with the threat of pain.

Adagio hasn’t mastered subtlety and she seems to do just fine. And Sonata had all the reason in the world to run. Pain is awful I would know.

Hey, it was your fault that you bought your armor from an alien in a back alley in the middle of the pouring rain in the middle of the night. As the saying goes you get what you pay for. That aside we see our love birds to be, chose what they want for dinner and they decided on Sushi.

No. Aria chooses sushi to fuck with Sonata and that makes her sad. I’m beginning to think you weren’t listening. My armour was handcrafted by a human. I’d just rather take it off in battle.

*facepalms*And that is why you get hurt in battle. Also Adagio isn't a person you should look up to. But thanks to Adagio’s bluntness she drops that the big reveal that Aria likes Sonata.

That aside I bought the stuff to do my hair like Adagio’s can you help me with that later?

No sorry you're the one with the date. And with Adagio’s statement about why Aria bullies Sonata. So Aria does the normal thing and quickly diynes it. But we all know the truth.

You’re a lot of help. Anyways Aria realises the wrong she’s done and goes to get Sonata a gift

A gift in the form of *sighs* tacos. We also find out that Aria is a neat freak. Also, I've help you out before but you never listen to my advice.

Yeah, you tell me to leave my armour on what sane person does that. Aria then proceeds to awkwardly ask, now it’s my turn to sigh, Sony if she wants to go to the orchestra in a week.

To which replies Sonata with gushing and girly fanatics.

Well one week later Aria nearly fucks everything over by getting into a D.C. versus Marvel argument. Where she’s backing the right side ya’ know… Marvel.

I will never understand that stupid feud about who would win their just paper with ink on them. But she then realized that she may be late and, chaos ensues plus Trixie.

If by plus Trixie you mean the best long standing nickname in history. Jezebel Blaze. That’s right, Trixie even jokes about Sirens being lures for sailors.

Well yes. So after Aria Look stop beating around the bush Aria rushes herself just to find the orchestra’s been cancelled.

So Aria gets home and enters her bedroom to find Sonata minus clothing lying on Aria’s bed. I wouldn’t mind that.

Yeah says the one with no partner what so ever. So Aria uses her powers of persuasion to get tickets to a One Direction concert that sold out a long time ago.

Hey I’m putting myself out there. It’s just difficult.

After a great night out and some weird teenage emotions, Sona convinces Aria to go back to school. But then a new problem arises aren't they Don’t you start on that shit. Aria’s what an extra two thousand years older. Do you want to end up like Trixie!

I was talking about how everyone thinks their sisters. But let’s not spoil how they resolve that. Also and I’m not afraid of Jezebel Blaze.

Geeeeeeeeeeeet duuuuuuuuuuunked oooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well let’s wrap this up shall we?

God that felt like three weeks! Well so what are your final thoughts.

Well I love the story. I can’t wait to read more of the story, to see what shenanigans they get into. Your thoughts?

Seeing as I already completed part one and started LCS it’s beautiful and I wouldn’t miss more for the world. Well I’d probably miss it for one person.

Well with out of the way we can work on that backstage No spoilers you rotten cheater!

Well till next time.


Hey everyone, this first impression of Love Beats Stupid was done collaboration with my good friend Erina Tail Yellow. So check her out has some stuff and after some persuasion she is redoing her first story. Also we are working on a very special collab.

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Thanks for the kind words!

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