Ten Hail Marys and One Our Father · 4:49am Jan 8th, 2017
I have a confession to make. I've retconned a small part of Chapter One of Greater Lights: Adaptation - the part where Derren describes his first glimpse of Faran's nethers. It works better this way for a few things I have planned down the road, trust me.
Okay then, what works best works best.
These things happen.... *coughwhendoupdateshappencough*
*snickers knowingly*
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I've got the first of a planned four scenes completed, and have started on the second scene. I will confess, however, that my writing sessions tend to resemble this Monty Python sketch (especially the early part about "signing one's name underneath meaningless doodles." ) :
TLDR; Updates will happen when they happen.
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Oh, hush, you.
I've been rewatching too much Bevis and Butthead lately, because I imagined their laughs in my head when you said nethers.
Like this:
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Oh fine.... fullness of time an' all that. All the best just the same, of course; I'll look forward to seeing it when I see it.
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Like that?
Could you please post a before and after snippet or at least give a summary of what changed since I don't really remember what it said before.
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The original text described her mare bits as having a more humanoid shape. I decided to retcon it to make Derrenverse ponies anatomically correct for equines in terms of their reproductive parts.
4374369 Ah, I see.
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Yeah!