Revision · 9:50am Sep 23rd, 2012
I'm really close to getting it done. I took a two-day break, and there were delays yesterday. I might not be able to release the revised chapter today, but it'll definitely be ready for tomorrow.
I'd like to once again apologize for this huge futz-up of a chapter. Sorry everybody.
Excellent.
It's all cool man! Take as long as you like! Better we wait a day and it be perfect than release it now and have flaws and OOC characters.
No prob. Sometimes you have a vision on how you want it to go, but sometimes a reader will get really irritated if a likable character is thrown.....
Well...Out of Character.
Take a look at Mass Effect 3
Character wise was good until 'That point' then it went down in the gutter faster than we can blink.
All in all, you at least acknowledge that something was wrong and made an effort to correct it, after everyone pointed it out. Good luck!