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The Sentient Cloud


I'm The Sentient Cloud, a now-retired fanfiction writer from New Zealand. If you're looking at this, then you've probably already found your way to either "The Piano Man" or "Those Who Came Before".

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  • 529 weeks
    All Clouds Dissipate (Retirement)

    Catchy title, right? Right. Moving on:

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    18 comments · 1,564 views
  • 560 weeks
    Checking In

    Some of you may have noticed a large lack of... well, anything, recently.

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    4 comments · 806 views
  • 571 weeks
    Updates on /everything/

    Okay, so as a little note: I am still around, and I am still working on the final Piano Man Chapter.
    But, that brings me to an interesting point, that being; I'm not entirely sure I'll keep writing for FIMFiction once it's over. I'm not saying I won't, but it's a possibility.

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  • 576 weeks
    Hard at Work

    I know I've been very quiet update-wise as of late, so I feel it's best that I put up a quick blog post.

    As per normal, Those Who Came Before is still on hiatus until I've put out these last two Piano Man chapters. I just felt I should reaffirm that. The first of the two-part epilogue for The Piano Man: Act II is close to completion too. I apologize for the long wait.

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    2 comments · 673 views
  • 583 weeks
    Google "The Piano Man"

    Every now and then, I Google my stories, just to see how far down the list they pop up. Obviously, The Piano Man has never been high on the search results unless you include 'FIMfiction' in the search bar.

    But...

    Seriously. What.
    WHAT.

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Sep
23rd
2012

Revision · 9:50am Sep 23rd, 2012

I'm really close to getting it done. I took a two-day break, and there were delays yesterday. I might not be able to release the revised chapter today, but it'll definitely be ready for tomorrow.

I'd like to once again apologize for this huge futz-up of a chapter. Sorry everybody.

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Comments ( 4 )

It's all cool man! Take as long as you like! Better we wait a day and it be perfect than release it now and have flaws and OOC characters.

No prob. Sometimes you have a vision on how you want it to go, but sometimes a reader will get really irritated if a likable character is thrown.....

Well...Out of Character.

Take a look at Mass Effect 3:pinkiecrazy:

Character wise was good until 'That point' then it went down in the gutter faster than we can blink.

All in all, you at least acknowledge that something was wrong and made an effort to correct it, after everyone pointed it out. Good luck! :scootangel:

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