just a guy from Vegas, that moved to California and likes fanfiction
On GItnBG, over five hundred people are tracking.
On LoaN, it's just over one hundred.
Wow... Next LoaN chapter is about halfway done, then I'll wright a GItnBG chapter.
Tell me things! Give me responses! About half of what I wright is inspired by what you people say and what you want, if I can work it in.
So ask me stuff or just give me ideas of what you want to see so I can fit it in!
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Oh yeah, I have that problem too, not really knowing what best to do with my story. Here's a tip: stick to a fitting theme.
I didn't read Loan, but what I CAN suggest for GIBN is to have the Overlord do something morally questionable that would conflict with the Mane 6 more directly. Yeah, the way he went about conquering the Changelings and keeping order over the Sheeple and Diamond Dogs might be morally questionable, but not much more than that.
What I mean by 'theme', would be a message, an idea you'd want to transmit to the reader. Underlining layers. Don't just show the reader something entertaining, it's the subtle things that catches your interest. A believable, understandable but at the same time unusual and motivated character that draws you in and shows you a part of you that you didn't know about, a version of yourself that you could be. Give your character an unusual but characteristic point to prove, a lesson to give, even if that lesson might be wrong. It would still be the Overlord's lesson, his very definition clashing with the world around him.
great your back. how about in LoaN; what if necromancy isn't illegal, a necromancer just needs 5 license that are hard as balls to get a has to pledge and/or a oath to use they're powers for the good of pony kind
or when celesta meets the little necromancer an see he's not evil just has a dark powers, she pull the 5 license and the oath out behind her sunny behind
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4337995 Now I'm sad that he deleted his comment before I could see it... Although, from the fact that he deleted it I can infer that it wasn't all that great of a comment.
Still wanted to read it though.
4338009 Sorry, but a big plot point later on is that Celly hates Pitch's guts with an equal or greater amount of fury as the sun, but is held back from destroying him by... well spoilers so...
4338434 tease.....
By the way guy who delete his comment was talking about in the over story you should go insane in the way of have some fun with it.
So Celly a racist or something along those lines
4338774 About Celly... only with anything that has/uses dark magic, I will go into it later in the story.
And as to the deleted story, sorry but no going crazy on either story, I already wrote a crack story and that was hard enough as it was.