Oct
16th
2016
Finding my muse Update. · 1:45am Oct 16th, 2016
Halfway through chapter 3. Looking over everything I am rather impressed with myself, but I still feel the story is a bit boring. So hopefully I can rectify this. It may just be my critical mind at work, as the feedback I have gotten has been constructive and positive, with me seeing a HUGE increase in views as well as the like to dislike ratio getting better. But today I'm done! So in the meantime, please enjoy this animation by Animatedjames.
you want boring? then read 'days of the wasp and spider' don't get me wrong, its a great story... but it is one of those that drone on. lol that video.. lol love it
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I know right?
I dunno, just my mind trying to balance the support i keep getting. I mean you don't think its boring right?
I do this to myself a lot. We are our worst critics.
4257617 to be honest? yes, we are our worse critics. but at the same time, there are a lot of diff. type of stories out there. and im sure plenty of people like your style
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So far it's liked, just need to stop making myself doubt the support I got.
4257719 the one kryptonite of being the author. always critical of your own works xD
don't worry. look at the positive reception as your only answer. only time you should allow yourself to look back at it and cringe, is when you've grown as a writer, and can think of better ways to have worded or allowed things to play out. takes time.
harmony pie has already noticed her improvement. and that says something. she was pretty good from the start.
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I see thanks.
Honestly, as your first story, you've done better than some newbie authors that I've seen. So I think you're doing something right.
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I'm surprised by the positive feedback I got from it at all.