Hey, could anypony check over the revised chapters 2 & 3 if I left in any obvious grammar mistakes? (Daring Do and the Secret of the Fourth Wall)

EDIT: Meta Four expertly went over chapters 2 and 3, and in less than 24 hours after I posted this blog.

Thanks! No further help needed.

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Hey, could anypony check over the revised chapters 2 & 3 if I left in any obvious grammar mistakes?

A few months ago, I made some heavy revisions to chapters 1 - 3.

Nothing changed plot-wise, but... I don't really trust I didn't leave in some grammar mistakes, or odd phrasing. Spelling itself should be fine.

I'm not a native speaker, remember?

Plus, I still wanna submit to Equestria Daily. I've spent too much time on fixing things up not to, at this point.

Can anypony check it over?

[GOOGLE DOCS LINK]

Litho already read over chapter 1, but chapters 2 and 3 are still to do.

......Yeah, no one's going to, are they?

Can't blame 'em.

...Worth a shot.

PS: Seen the season 6 finale.

Comments

[kudzuhaiku]

You have better grammar than many, many native speakers.

[Reese]

"I'm not a native speaker, remember? "
Wow, no, I didn't. :)

As for the request... ehhhh... Sorry. I might, but it comes at a somewhat inopportune time for me, in that I today received around seventeen kilowords to edit for two other stories (a combined seventeen, that is, not seventeen each, at least!). Good luck, though.

[Streamline]

I'll probably check it over tomorrow, if I have time, since it's Thanksgiving. No guarantee I'll find everything, though.

Plus, while I remember enjoying it when I first read it, it's been so long, I've basically forgotten what happened, so I'll want to refresh my memory, and it's well after midnight for me now.

[Ultra-the-HedgeToaster]

4246631 Aww, thanks!

4247761 4246706
No longer needed. Meta Four already went over the whole thing.

Thanks anyway!

[Ultra-the-HedgeToaster]

4247761 PPS: I have a "refresher" for the last 9 chapters coming up, with basically all the "highlight" moments.

And I managed to squeeze it down to something only the length of ~5k words!

So it should be pretty easy to re-read.

[Streamline]

4247924 Well then, I can't wait!

[Reese]

4247923
Oh, thank you, Meta Four! I was hoping that I might be able to squeeze it in later today, but I still have a lot to do; glad to know it's been taken care of.

You're welcome. :)

4247924
Ah, thanks in advance. :)

[Ultra-the-HedgeToaster]

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