Tiny Excerpt Time · 11:05am Oct 1st, 2016
“Sway with me.” Adagio took the girl’s hands in her own, chest to chest with the former pony. She pulled Sunset away from the table, keeping them tightly together. The beat thundered. “I was a force of nature.”
Should that be "I was a a force of nature." ? Otherwise, looks good.
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Yeah, should be an 'a' in there. 's what I get for writing at 5 AM.
Swaaaay my waaaaay!
Now I have that stuck in my head.