I'm gonna be honest, I'm not exactly all that pleased with Floyd's last chapter. I'm not sure what it is, but it's the reason Floyd has been updated for a while. How do you guys feel? Would you like me to rewrite it? Comment down below and let me know.
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In the end, it's your decision. If you don't like it and want to rewrite it, hey its your story, go for it. Either way, I'm just happy to have more story.
you talking Perchance to dream? Was really thrilled with it.
4233708 That was an April Fools Day gag
4233710 I ment the chapter above it my bad.
4233712 I'm talking about the first Hollow Shades chapter
4233721 yup that's the one.
4233725 I'm just not feeling it
4233753 That's basically How I feel about that chapter. could be good but feels off for the story.
4233756 thats why I'm rewriting a good portion of it
Was good IMO. If you are not satisfied with it, you have all rights to rewrite it as you see fit - you're author, after all.
I also didn't feel it to well it felt forced.
and so many more.
I say you should have floyd stick to the Hasbroverse and hasbro related puns and characters, I mean you got GI joe to work with, Jem, Inhumanoids, transformers, robotix, Battleship Movie
I plan to write my own story one day and I definitely like the idea of using pinkie as the main attraction
4234588 I mean, I already have a pack of MGS Diamond Dogs
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And I found them to fit well and were very funny to see, the vampire thing seemed more forced is all or didn't seem to be something you flowed well into, guess maybe work on the way it flows?