Chapter Four for 'Conversion Bureau: united We Stand' sent to proofreader!

As the title says, I have sent the next chapter for The Conversion Bureau: United We Stand to my ever-awesome proofreader, Shubzilla.

Comments

[Beyond the Horizon]

Hahahahaaaaa! Ohh, you have no idea how long I've waited to hear those words! It seems I've gained a pleasure in seeing TCB!Celestia get served. Thats not a bad thing right?

[boredhooman]

[Cosmic Mind]

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[ZeldaTheSwordsman]

Don't care, fic was not what you promised it'd be.

[Miyu Shinohara]

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Well, what did you think it was going to be? From what was seen in the description, it's already been following the description pretty clearly. You also seem to care enough you'd tell Striker twice. Once a few weeks ago, now this?

I'm honestly kind of curious like Striker was- just what did you think Striker promised it'd be?

[DreadedCandiru2]

Watching Canon Celestia school TCB's Stalinestia should be a load of laughs. I'm reminded of a really old Legion of Superheroes wherein Darkseid realizes that thanks to Highfather freeing the Daxamites from his mind control, he's got seven billion Supermen coming to beat him to a pulp. I think that a certain Oncoming Storm can inject a little rebellion in the new-foals quite easily. I also think that TCB!Celestia and her stooges ain't gonna be quite so smug when they realize Discord pulled the most basic scam in the book by using someone's fear of chaos to make her cause more chaos.

[ZeldaTheSwordsman]

357822 Back when first announced he said it was going to be one of the non-cynical takes, staying truer to the spirit of the very original TCB stuff.

[Miyu Shinohara]

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Well, if that is true, then I could see why you are a bit disappointed, if Striker's end story ended up being very different from what it originally was going to be, but does that give you the right to act like a jerk to him? First you comment on his story it just "Isn't what he promised", and now literally weeks later with no update, the second he does a blog post on it you go out of your way to tell him you personally don't care about his story, like everything revolves around you. Makes you seem like the kind of guy who waits weeks for something only so you can rip on it.

[Starman Ghost]

*confetti*

I saw the Google Doc, you guys shouldn't be disappointed