KOTD realization · 10:00am Aug 21st, 2016
AS I'm going back through, there's several things I never talked about that I've decided to improve.
#1 In chapter three, the princesses never react to seeing Taraska. It's mostly ruins. Houses are burnt down, there's debris everywhere. And they never react to it. Originally i thought it was assumed they pretended not to care as to not embarrass the Taraskans, but this seems a bit...odd. So I'm adding in a few paragraphs where they comment on it.
#2 Emeris gets like...no screentime. I mean I was focusing more on their city, situation, and the story and completely neglected the poor guy through like most of the story. I know Lucretia(It's pronounced Lucre-shia by the way) gets her chance to shine in the later chapters, but Emeris is in a ton of scenes but doesn't do much after chapter three.