The Sequel is Out! · 12:44pm Aug 17th, 2016
After a long time of thinking up and scrapping dozens of ideas, it is finally finished! I have posted the sequel to The Two With Good Taste, titled The Two of Us. So if you'd like, feel free to grab a drink and a crazy straw and give it a go.
I just hope those who read it find it worthy of its predecessors.
It was cute and fluffy, and I thoroughly enjoyed it, but I think the end was a little rushed, and could have been elaborated a bit more. The animals were a surprise, but not an unpleasant one, and one I should have seen coming.
That ending, though.....I'm not sure Fluttershy, who seemed really insecure and stuff, would go along with what the ending implies, it seems out of character.
But, I still liked it, and hope for more Fluttercord.
4154506 I'm sorry that it felt rushed! I did struggle ending it, that's true. But I'm glad you still enjoyed it. It may not be a masterpiece, and honestly I'm still stunned by how popular the first oneshot was, but I did give put a lot if effort into it, so I really hope it doesn't read like something I just whipped up together. Though I will admit, there are parts that just seemed to pop in out of nowhere, like the part with Rarity.
Ah, I knew people would get that implication. Though honestly I don't see them doing that. To me, they kissed and then took a nap. I figured one could just interpret it however they wanted, and that's how I did it.
But if you have any ways I could maybe improve it later, please, feel free to share. Thanks for your thoughts!