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taterforlife


I love fluttercord way too much.

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  • 69 weeks
    Quick Question

    I feel like most fluttercord fans have moved on. And I have no right to ask because I am the worst at keeping promises, but if I ever finished a weird "Beauty and the Beast" fluttercord-style, would you read it?

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    24 comments · 434 views
  • 69 weeks
    "Discord's Patchwork Adventure" by Comicizzum

    I know it's been a long time, and I know I probably don't really have a lot of followers anymore since so many have moved on from the fandom, but I tend to hold on and never let go. And in doing so, I found an amazing fluttercord story that features romance (obviously), touching friendship scenes that show it ISN'T just the romantic relationship that matters, a large amount of beloved side

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    3 comments · 201 views
  • 208 weeks
    Um... New Story Maybe and Also I'm Sorry

    I know. It's been too long

    I'm sorry.

    I'm writing a new one shot though. I missed writing. I never left the fandom, but life got busy. And it is still very incredibly busy.

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    8 comments · 778 views
  • 379 weeks
    I Have Changed My Mind!

    So I hardly EVER split chapters into two separate parts. I've done it before, but only like once or maybe twice. But then Phoaray (an awesome writer, btw, I highly recommend his Twixie/Fluttercord story, Hopes and Follies), suggested that I consider it. I originally told him that I didn't really do that, and gave him a really gross metaphor

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    3 comments · 969 views
  • 381 weeks
    Still Writing It: Short Sneak Peek Included

    I'm at 11K now, and Discord's still a friggin' little kid.

    *begins to tear hair out*

    Why must everything I write must be so long? Gah.

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    4 comments · 719 views
Aug
17th
2016

The Sequel is Out! · 12:44pm Aug 17th, 2016

After a long time of thinking up and scrapping dozens of ideas, it is finally finished! I have posted the sequel to The Two With Good Taste, titled The Two of Us. So if you'd like, feel free to grab a drink and a crazy straw and give it a go. :pinkiesmile:

I just hope those who read it find it worthy of its predecessors.

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Comments ( 2 )

It was cute and fluffy, and I thoroughly enjoyed it, but I think the end was a little rushed, and could have been elaborated a bit more. The animals were a surprise, but not an unpleasant one, and one I should have seen coming.
That ending, though.....I'm not sure Fluttershy, who seemed really insecure and stuff, would go along with what the ending implies, it seems out of character.
But, I still liked it, and hope for more Fluttercord.

4154506 I'm sorry that it felt rushed! I did struggle ending it, that's true. But I'm glad you still enjoyed it. It may not be a masterpiece, and honestly I'm still stunned by how popular the first oneshot was, but I did give put a lot if effort into it, so I really hope it doesn't read like something I just whipped up together. Though I will admit, there are parts that just seemed to pop in out of nowhere, like the part with Rarity.

Ah, I knew people would get that implication. Though honestly I don't see them doing that. To me, they kissed and then took a nap. I figured one could just interpret it however they wanted, and that's how I did it.

But if you have any ways I could maybe improve it later, please, feel free to share. Thanks for your thoughts!

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