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Preview: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Universal Magic: Episode 23: A Griffin's Debt: (Episode 23-2)

Now, after he said that, in his head, TF then said, 'Fools. All of them are fools. They have no idea what they are walking into. They think that these guns are for the better...bullshit. I am simply leading them to the slaughterhouse....and I'll watch Equestria burn to the ground as I make Knight watch what he loves dies in front of him as I have TK's head on a stake. All will burn...all will burn...but that will come in good time. For now...I must concentrate on keeping up the illusion, making it look like I'm one of them and that I'm trying to help them. But in truth, they don't understand the pain that I have had...to be forgotten and thrown aside in a mine for ten long years. Left to rot...no...Knight is the bad guy here...but everyone else...they can all burn for all I care. Let their souls burn as they are forever tortured in the deep bowls of Hell. Let them destroy themselves as I send an invasive spices towards their way...guns that is...and they will all burn as something is in their homeland that is not supposed to be there at all. And all that dare stand in my way shall perish along with everyone else here. And as for this group of ponies...I hope they can perform well with what I am about to give them. Hopefully they can survive long enough, but in the end all I'm doing is leading them to the slaughter. All I need to do is not make the same mistake that others have done throughout history, not making my act believable. I am playing the wolf part here, so I must act in disguise and kill these sheep when the time is right. And thankfully, IT has told me how to act like one...I just need to make sure that I don't slip up again. Granted I can reveal my true nature...but only on their death bed...the only one that knows that the Wolf is in the hen house though is Star Glitter. Granted she knows to keep herself silent...but I cannot trust her...besides...IT told me that she must never be trusted with my operation. And what a shame too...she seemed kind of nice to have around. Oh well, all in good time...all will burn...'

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