'Changelings' Improved

I just completed editing 'Changelings: Monsters or Misunderstood' with the very helpful Koekelbag's assistance, resulting in a much better story-flow and lack of the horrible tensing and structuring errors that were present before. The story is now strictly in past-tense, and is much easier to read overall if I do say so myself. Feel free to re-read it if you'd like to see the differences.

Comments

[Rocinante]

Awesome! I had this marked as interesting, but too hard to read.