Sprucing up KOTD · 10:23am Jul 4th, 2016
I've gone back and added extra dialogue, body language, descriptions ect ect to KOTD. I just finished chapter 10. Whew I'm tired, but I feel 3x better about the story now. Some parts seemed to be lacking, or rushed because I wasn't in the mood to write at the time. If you ever feel like a re-read, I think you'll enjoy it.
4072534 I keep meaning to get back to your story as well lol. I'll try to get in another chapter this week, I have a long vacation starting on friday and I don't think I'll have internet
Nice! Imma go check out the next chapter right now :)