Feedback on... something different

I know I'm not a good writer, I have some good ideas and imagination, but I also know that my writing may suck sometimes, but... that imagination and creativity may be used for something else... something very different to what's published in this community, but I still want to know what people think about it... if somebody reads it of course...

A game, made by me...

It was no joke

Comments

[Lloyd01251]

I definitely need to watch that video when I get home

[John the brony and yknow]

4025637 Tell me what you think when you see it . By the way it is veeeery very underdeveloped, I made it in like 1 hour so it's not such a big deal, I will upload another video with a game that has more time being developed :O

[Time Reaper]

It looks very interesting (kinda reminded me of VVVVVV for how basic it looked), I think it looks nice, good job, you're already doing what I would like to do the most: make videogames.

You can find VVVVVV on Steam too.

[John the brony and yknow]

4027310 Si yo se de VVVVVVV, he visto algunos videos, aunque mas bien me base en otro juego llamado hero core (indie tambien) aqui un video del juego:

[Time Reaper]

4027622

It looks and sound good, I'll check it out if I have the chance.