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'Visions are worth fighting for. Why spend your life making someone else's dreams?'

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  • 31 weeks
    If you work near a bread slicer...

    ... be sure to wear cut-resistant gloves. Slicing your finger open on rapidly-moving blades is not a fun experience, nor is cleaning the wound afterwords. Safety regulations are there for a reason! I'm lucky that I still have an intact finger, and that it'll be healed up fully within a month, but that's something I hope none of you ever have to experience.

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  • 53 weeks
    Updates and a question

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  • 64 weeks
    If you could erase one MLP character from existance, who would it be?

    I'd get rid of Button Mash. Not because I have anything against him, but because it would spare us all from the seemingly countless incest stories he's involved in. I know every fandom has it's seeder, unsavory sides, but good God, why are so many people into stories of a grade-school child having sex with his mom, or her wanting to have sex with him? Knowing that his (non-canon) mother

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  • 74 weeks
    New Story: 'The Basement'

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    The Basement

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  • 77 weeks
    Update on 'Thorns of Stone'

    Hi everyone

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May
3rd
2016

Changes to the chapter, "Family." · 5:15pm May 3rd, 2016

In response to comments brought up by several of you regarding the events of the latest chapter, I have gone back and made a few edits, which are in spoiler tags for those who haven't read it yet.

*Silverspeak and his family cornering Mangus and telling him to give up has been removed: Silverspeak and his family now rush in for the killing blow after Silverspeak lets go of the chandelier, but Mangus blows the sanctuary in half before he can be taken out.

*Silverspeak's mother telling him to spare Mangus after he's been hit in the chest has been removed and replaced with Mangus now pretending to be dead.

*When Silverspeak punches Mangus into the wall, it now breaks apart and collapses on top of Mangus as he falls, partially burying him. Mangus still shoots Silverspeak's parents, but can't pull himself from the rubble and is yanked out by Silverspeak and thrown into the abyss.

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Comments ( 1 )

Yeah, this is a better way. After Mangus tries to kill you after you give him mercy like 3 times, i think "killing" him is better.

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