Rise of the shadow king

Its been edited, I can't believe how much I've improved since I first published it, I was wondering how people could not like it a ton on only the first chapter, I saw why when I reread it though, so many mistakes! Its embarrassing, anyway a lot is different now, mainly because its anthro. I haven't had an anthro story in a while, and never had one successfully finished, so I hope that will change now. Anyway the story is still nothing special, I realized that while I was editing it, especially since it has a couple not too many people support, but I don't care. I will start making the outline for the next chapter soon, but I will not publish another chapter until punch out is done.