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Dark Chocolate


Converting daydreams into stories helps me pretend to be human.

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  • 66 weeks
    Heading out

    As many of you suggested, why not just leave my account up and stop logging in, so that's what I'm doing.

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  • 69 weeks
    Deleting account soon

    I mostly have kept this here to get feedback on King of the Dedad but apart from the occasional favorite or upvote, there's not much to be had. I write original stuff now adays and as much as MLP will always be a huge part of my history, I don't really do ponies anymore. I still listen to the music for both MLP and EQG but that's about it. I'm also tired of the "notifications get deleted after 2

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  • 135 weeks
    Go watch the G5 movie

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  • 149 weeks
    KOTD Forgot Last Chapter

    I don't know why, but it never posted the last chapter. I am so sorry lol

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  • 152 weeks
    KOTD Finished

    Two days ago, at 5:53am, I finished my final chapter. There's four in total and I'll be posting them all over the course of 4 days, one per day. Let me tell you, it's been a ride. I've had so many ups and downs, disgustingly inappropriate reviews, amazing fans and I learned a lot about myself. I used KOTD to vent when I couldn't afford a therapist and those chapters were some of my best. Are

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Mar
2nd
2016

King of the Dead Part 3 preview · 6:33am Mar 2nd, 2016

“Your majesty, I received a letter from you, calling for aid against an Og Nag attack?” She looks confused. I hold out the letter. She takes it and reads it over, “I didn’t send this.” I glance at Emeris, then back to Celestia. “Your highness...who would have a reason to forge a letter from you?” She thinks for a moment and comes up with nothing. I turn to Emeris, “What’s going on? What possible reason would someone have to send us here?” Emeris , “I could see them sending us to an area for an ambush but that would take some serious guts...unless they don’t want to ambush US, they just want us gone so they can…” We both think it at the same time: Taraska. “They want us gone so they can take our city.” Celestia and Luna both Gasp.
Luna “Do you need our assistance?” I suck up my pride, “Actually, if you think you can get to Taraska faster than we can and help hold them off until we arrive, it may make or break our defensive.” She nods and takes off. We haul it down the road to get back to our units. Sergeant Dayke meets us before we even descend the mountain, “Sir, smoke from our city! They’re signalling for aid!” I growl angrily, feeling stupid “Get everyone back to the Rollers now!” We start down the mountain when Luna flies back to us. “Raiden, there’s a massive wave of Og Nag to the South! They’re going to hit Ponyville! I’m sorry but I must evacuate my people!” Before she flies away, I ask one last question “Luna, how many? Can you give me an estimate?!” She swallows “Thousands! And we don’t have enough guards to hold them!” Emeris looks at me and says what I was hoping he wouldn’t “We can either save them, or save us. They don’t have the forces to hold off the Og Nag, they’ll have huge casualties. But we don’t know how many are hitting Taraska. We do know they needed us gone though. So we can save our city, or Ponyville. Your call Captain.”

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