• Member Since 17th Feb, 2016
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Dark Chocolate


Converting daydreams into stories helps me pretend to be human.

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  • 66 weeks
    Heading out

    As many of you suggested, why not just leave my account up and stop logging in, so that's what I'm doing.

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  • 69 weeks
    Deleting account soon

    I mostly have kept this here to get feedback on King of the Dedad but apart from the occasional favorite or upvote, there's not much to be had. I write original stuff now adays and as much as MLP will always be a huge part of my history, I don't really do ponies anymore. I still listen to the music for both MLP and EQG but that's about it. I'm also tired of the "notifications get deleted after 2

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    6 comments · 340 views
  • 135 weeks
    Go watch the G5 movie

    I absolutely loved it! It had similar but slightly different humor to it that I don't know how to describe. There's more variations in how ponies look just from how they're physically built. They give a pretty big nod to G4 but leave plenty of room open to explore what happened between then and now. My only criticism is it was a bit more PG than I would have liked but I understand why. The

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  • 149 weeks
    KOTD Forgot Last Chapter

    I don't know why, but it never posted the last chapter. I am so sorry lol

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  • 152 weeks
    KOTD Finished

    Two days ago, at 5:53am, I finished my final chapter. There's four in total and I'll be posting them all over the course of 4 days, one per day. Let me tell you, it's been a ride. I've had so many ups and downs, disgustingly inappropriate reviews, amazing fans and I learned a lot about myself. I used KOTD to vent when I couldn't afford a therapist and those chapters were some of my best. Are

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Mar
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Working on part 3 · 10:37am Mar 1st, 2016

So I've hit a big bump as far as King of the Dead goes. I'm detailing a large battle that takes place, and it's chewing up a lot of my time, but it will be the bulk of part 3. I'm trying to keep each chapter to around 15 pages, so you can keep track of where you are in the story with more ease, but I'm not sure if I need to break them down even further. What doe anyone think about a good chapter size? Right now, they sit at about
10k-15k words a chapter. Does 7 sound better?

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