Lesson Applejack done

I finished the story, got bored, and decided I'd release the rest of it at once. I mean the last few chapters haven't really been properly edited, but anyone still reading this story at that point is not into it for its pristine spelling and lack of plot holes.

Comments

[Bloodscale]

You did really kick it into overdrive this time, yeah. o_O Well, I suppose novelty is part of the allure and stuff gets stale without it.

[drakxs]

Just when I thought I was done reading it to the point it was written, I thought it was enough of senseless rape and murder for while. Oh well...

[headless_rainbow]

3739876 It is exceedingly senseless; it definitely takes a ... special kind of person to read all of my stories and not wear thin eventually, so I understand that. Though I am rather happy with the way this one ended. I meant to end it another way, but when I was writing that chapter, I just sorta wrote around that and kept going, so I added a few more chapters to round out the new chain of events. These stories write themselves, really.

[drakxs]

3739900 Yeah I know, never made it to the end of any of your stories, probably because they are too long, Spikey Wikey was a special case as I decided to drop it of when I was still able handle it. Just a question, why all the murders and rapes are always so senseless? Why the characters become psychotic homicidal necrophiles out of nothing? Why no background story or slow descending to the dark side?

[headless_rainbow]

3739980 Well actually, the reason that Applejack went over the edge is explained later in the story

And I write stories like that mainly because no one else does, so I write mainly for the small group of people that like such stories. Some of them are paid commissions as well, so they contain exactly what I was asked to make them contain. I know someone must like all these horrible things, since I got a steady stream of requests when I did take commissions, and at least two people who would like to commission me again if I ever started doing that again.

But yes, I have scraped the bottom of the barrel for evil things to do, so I have considered making some stories that are more unique than extreme. Though things I write on this account are still going a bit rape-ish at the least.

[drakxs]

3740134 Yes you have certainly reached the bottom of the barrel, now break through it! Dig the very bottom of hell of necessary, but keep on the good work. There must be something more, something outside the boundaries, the questions is what? And you're right about something it takes some guts to write this kind of stories. Just an other question: Given the usual length of your stories have you ever considered making slow crescendo, starting with a totally innocent character and making it gradually become evil and insane as the story goes on, beginning with some mild stuff, like using forbidden magic and leaving the murders and rape to the very last chapters?

[headless_rainbow]

3740697 I usually intend on making the rise to insanity a bit more gradual, but then I get wet and have them go off too early.

The most 'believable' one I've done is probably Twilight is Celestia's Relaxing Vacation where she was tortured and raped into insanity, at first obeying out of fear and gradually growing to love what she was told to do. I intended to be more gradual with Celestia in that one too, but then I didn't.

As for going lower, let's see... I've had foals either fully impaled or aborted with cock, I've had a foal rape their freshly-aborted dead fetus sibling, I've had a character eat mixtures of cum, vomit, shit, and maggot-ridden dead flesh, I've had babies fucked to death and then ground up and fed to their parents, I've had ponies have a competition as to who could rape and murder the most school children in diverse manners... I can't really think of anything that I haven't done, or at least anything worse than what I've done. Not that I'm not open to ideas.

[drakxs]

3741017 I'm also in the search of new ideas and new horizonts, but in my case I will rather leave the foals out of the equation, it may not happen here in fimfiction but out there the hammer of ban is in the hands of blinded idiots. If you looking for some ideas I would recommend you the work of the manga artists Juan Gotoh and Shintaro Kago,but you may already be familiar with it.

[Reverb]

As I said before, I'd love to see a stand alone short story about Pinkie Pie's snuff party with the troop of filly scouts!

[headless_rainbow]

3767467 And it would give me an excuse to murder Ginger Snap, who I've never gotten to murder. No promises though, I have too many requests already.

[Reverb]

3778955 awesome! That would be pretty hot! Look forward to it :3