Greetings, travelers. I welcome you to this fine land. May you find glory in the Hunt, kindred hunter.
Man, it's great to be back at home on my computer. This Christmas was a blast. I'm so glad to be back, and now I can finally continue writing my newest work in progress, A Midnight Eclipse, my story for the PoME universe.
I've missed you guys so much.
Did I miss much?
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Not really, we're glad you're back.
3648072 Thanks. Nice to see I haven't missed much.
Welcome back! You're gonna join the PoME universe?! Awesome!
3648132 Yep. And I'm doing an OC pairing: Solar Eclipse and Midnight Sky. Here's my prologue so far.
Password is BlueBloodwilldie
3648138 Just read it, looks great! Can't wait till you publish it on fimfic. I'll like and fave it immediatly
3648199 Thanks.
Wb!!
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3648261 Thanks! It's great to be back.
welcome back man, its great to have you back.
Fang: as well boss has been very, very distracted
Indigo: Fang is meaning by the boss has been playing Alice: Madness returns on pc because of the steam winter sale.
and i somewhat regret it because it delays story work time, but again welcome back man and its great have you back.
3648286 Thanks, it's great to be back.
Ha, you think that's bad? The boss over here was just playing a little Skyrim on his computer testing some mods from the Steam Workshop and is about to go back on it.
Hey, you know how much I love that game.
We know boss. Besides you got a little bit of work done on our story, so you did something.
Yeah, I added a few things to the beginning so we can get a better idea of how he looks.
3648307 your welcome man, its great to have you back.
Fang: wow but still i digress.
Indigo: boss bought four games during the sale, lets just say he gets frustrated at one of them.
yeah well as long as the damn acrobatic runner police leave Faith alone i would not need to shoot them, if your wondering what game its mirrors edge.
3648317 I got $120 in Steam and I just got Divinity: Dragon Commander and I'm gonna get Terraria, X-com: Enemy Unknown, X-com: Enemy Within, a few Final Fantasy games, Dragon Age: Origins Pillars of Eternity, and Divinity: Original Sins.
Jeez boss, you think you got enough games?!
Of course not!
3648329 i agree with solar you can never have enough games.
Fang: and that is why boss is distracted from writing the next chapter.
Indigo: but hes trying to get back in the swing of things.
which is true.
3648338 Please call me Eclipse.
Trust me, boss probably won't upload this story for like another week or 2 just so he can play his games.
Which is exactly what I'm gonna do.
3648346 alrighty then. As well that makes sense but you can never hinder progress.
Fang: boss you really need to stop playing Alice.
NEVER!
3648363 True that man.
Boss, can you please stop playing Skyrim and get back to our story.
NEVER!
Boss, don't make use my kyusho-jitsu on you.
You seem to forget that I gave you that skill. I can easily take it away.
...
...
That's what I thought.
3648371 HAH! now that was funny, as well i forgot to tell you something.
Fang: you think its a good idea boss?
i have my doubts on a lot of things but i think its a good idea, Eclipse remember when i said Fang`s original fighting style was like the dishwasher?
3648375 Yes of course. Why do you ask?
3648390 well i wanted to say was that not all of it was removed from writing.
Fang: boss is meaning by if i become in a complete blind rage i use some forms of fighting from the dishwasher series.
meaning by the second game as he will fight with his bare hands or a weapon he will fight like yuki from the first level in the dishwasher vampire smile. just wanted to say that pretty neat huh?
3648406 That would be neat.
3648263
3648426 it will be as it might come in a latter chapter, don't know yet.
3648430 We'll just have to wait and see.
3648438 yup, all i can say is that one of the later chapters is going to be intereting, might as well have Fang singing boulavard of broken dreams with sceanes of indigo singing as well.
3648461 I kinda wanna see that now.
As do I.
Me too.
Also, I'm thinking about having you in my prologue, to give Midnight a tour of the school since she's never been there before.
But what about Eclipse? He needs a guide too.
I was at the Friendship Games, babe. I already saw the school and I got familiar with it's layout.
Oh.
3648472 thanks but that scene wont happen till a few chapter from now(three to be exact two big ones will happen after chapter 10) as well Fang does not mind being do you Fang?
Fang: i don't mind maybe as well be able to introduce you to the group.
3648594 Sure thing. My plan was that both Fang and Soul would be the ones to introduce Eclipse into the group and have Midnight join in after chapter 2. Though I also kinda want Luna to ask the Rainbooms and the boys to befriend Eclipse as a way of helping him.
3648604 hmm... i like both ideas the reason with midnight is because Soul is good with making friends and Fang is beginning to trust people again, and with Eclipse i think it is a good idea to help him out of his shell and make friends.
3648611 Yeah, and I want Luna to be the one to ask Fang and Soul because 1: they'll be the first two people he meets, and 2: the gang is really good at making friends along with the Rainbooms, which is exactly what Eclipse has been lacking most of his life: friends. And Luna can ask them not as the vice principal, but as a mother looking out for her son.
3648626 i like those reasons as well that is very sweet of luna looking out for eclipse, i like it.
3648635 Thanks. Plus it makes sense; Crystal Prep is known for having ruthless students that are only interested in personal gain and no one else, the exact opposite of Canterlot High, along with Eclipse being abused as a child before being adopted by Luna, he no doubt has social issues. The only people in his life that have cared for him are his mother, Luna, and his little sister, Cynder, and that would obviously concern Luna as a parent.
I'm sorry you had to hear all that hun. *kisses Eclipse on the cheek*
It's fine. People need to know. Besides, why do you think I took lessons in kyusho-jitsu and Chi Na? To prevent any further traumatizing incidents to my already fragile mind.
3648651 makes complete sense if you ask me, as well Fang likes to make new friends as well i am going to say this in one of the next few chapters Fang is going to get a visit from two people he would never want to see again.
3648656 Oh boy. Maybe around the time I publish the Prologue, we can work together on some chapters for each other.
3648664 that would be great man, it would be great to work together.
3648670 Sweet. I can't wait!
3648702 neither can i, i think its going to be fun.
3648712 Oh it will, I can guarantee it.
I also thought of something interesting for Eclipse: if he uses kyusho-jitsu and Chi Na, both forms of martial arts specializing in pressure points, what would happen if Eclipse had his fingernails come to a fine point like claws. How much would that help him in combat?
3648720 hmm... lets see if you his a pressure point it deactivates it, if you use a blade or claw like finger nails it could paralyze someone, i should know a friend was telling me about if you hit a pressure point to hard you could paralyze a person but that is only certain pressure points.
3648729 That's a good point, but with enough training and practice, he could easily apply just enough pressure to not severely damage anything vital. He could easily jab someone with enough force in the right pressure point to hurt his opponent but not cause any serious damage. That's what I was going to have him do with Blueblood; puncture a pressure point in his spine that could cause paralysis from the neck down, and threaten to permanently paralyze him if he hurt Midnight or Cynder again.
3648735 hmm... heheheheh BWAAAHHHHAAAAA! now that is funny man, as well would teach him a lesson, but then again with all PoME characters there will be a way that Blueblood will piss them off one way or another, hell i was thinking for chapter nine with a fight between Fang and blueblood, but as well might give the audience a little bit of a taste of Fangs rage.
3648744 I like that idea.
And if possible, let me join in the fight.
Just make sure you leave him alive. I want to get a few hits on him myself.
3648753 i might just do that man, i will make sure as a definite to write you in the story in chapter nine, as well i might leave him alive mostly.
3648760 Good.
Eclipse? You OK there hun?
I think Eclipse is going to get ready for the slaughter. I'll get the tickets!
Boss!
3648768 i wonder how this will end oh wait... very badly for blueblood but as well i was thinking of adding that chapter later and have something to do with a person that Indigo really hates, his name is ledger and he is a scumbag like blue blood bad so yeah.
3648772 OOH, maybe Midnight can help Indigo deal with that Ledger prick! It'll be a good bonding experience for the two.
3648777 that it would but i am thinking that chapter nine will be were the two are added to the story with your permission of course and i think that having ledger pay a visit to the school and teaming up with blueblood as the two have different goals, blueblood trying to punish the peasants he would call Fang and Eclipse and with Ledger trying to get together with Indigo but the two beat the crap out of him.
3648783 I already approve of this. I, of course, shall give you permission to use Eclipse and Midnight.
Just in case you don't have their descriptions: Eclipse has tan skin (similar to Sunset), spiky black hair with a blue streak going to the left, emerald green eyes, a blood red t shirt with a black leather jacket, a dark pair of bluejeans, and black and red tennis shoes, along with fingernails that come to a point like claws. (sorry but it sounds too cool to not have on him.)
Midnight has light yellow skin, amethyst purple eyes, a white t shirt with a thin, light blue jacket and matching light blue skirt, black leggings, and blue high heels.
3648797 thank you man for both, as well i will make sure to have the two in chapter nine as well here is a little taste of whats to come in the next three chapters after nine.
Fang standing up to two old... 'friends'
a rescue from the everfree mansion
Fang fighting to protect his friends.
that is all i am going to give.
3648804 Cool. Can't wait to see it.
3648807 yup as well the part i said of the singing of boulevard of broken dreams will happen in chapter 11.