Have I been too ambitious · 4:41pm Oct 13th, 2015
I feel really bad for all the unfinished projects I've started... and for letting down people who wanted endings. Real life, stress, anxiety, and lasyness have played factors.
Through collage, I used to use my FiM account as a self esteem builder when things weren't going my way. For a time that helped. Then I saw that even with the high ratings my stories get... there is still a hudge skill gap between me and my peers.
Anyways... once my nerves calm down I plan to write more MMBB and adding to my clop anthology series. All also continue to help my friends at Alicorn Games with there game...(which I haven't worked on since last month)
Also. Been meeting some cool Bronies and Star Wars fans on Twitter, and found a place close to me where I can play D&D. Future is bright, :)
You absolutely can be an amazing writer, as demonstrated in the opening chapters of My Mortal Big Brother.
3467272 I will certainly try to recapture that in latter chapters. I think the big problem is trying to add to much to an already exposition heven story, making it more convoluted in the process. Last chapter I teased Sunset Shimmer plus a New OC character. I think I might go back and wright her out. It would take to much development to make the role I had in mind for her believable.
I thinking getting the story back to the mission will help bring it back to its roots.
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a core part of the plot.
Where you fucked up:
1. Making Changelings, especially those kids
2. Not following how you originally worked with your first editors.
3467394 The changelings other than Blitz and Wasp aren't going to be much of a thing going forward. Chrysalis and the hive are in shambles and are probably going to wait during the coming war. That won't stop them from trying to assassinate Shining because Chrysalis in this story is a real obsessive bitch. I'm also hoping to reconnect with some editors.
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But why put them so much in the first story if you have a sequel to actually deal with the changelings?