update on ch 4 V2 · 10:08pm Sep 20th, 2015
AS of 9/19/2015 chapter four has entered the editing process. It's going to be a week or two for the editing to be done. Then the chapter shall go up.
In other news I have started ch 5. Chapter 5 and 6 will be the transitional period to the second ark so there will be less action. But never fear there will be drama and the rebuilding of Twiluna ship, also a new ship will set sail. As they say all's fair in love and war.
If you have any questions feel free to ask.
Now another sneak peek of the chapter 4 Along Time Coming.
looked into Moon Dancers eyes and saw them flicker.
But she was now more alert and casually looked around the room until her eyes fell on her back pack, more importantly the back side.
“We use any tactic to win a battle.”
“For on the darkest of night a Valkyrie shall rise...from the winter wind."
"I was so close to deploying again, but now I am an element of harmony. I guess my family doesn’t have to worry anymore. That I can handle, what I can’t handle is many of my comrades treating me like I some kind of delicate flower.”
“My name is Twilight Anna Sparkle fifth Valkyrie of Equestria.”
Febnic16, signing out till next time.
