Mocha OC (overview) · 5:20am Aug 25th, 2015
Name: Mocha Star
Nicknames: Chef Mocha
Gender: Male
Age: 24 (6,100)
Species: Earth Pony (Alicorn)
Hometown: Trottingham
Current Residence: House in rural Vanhoover area
Occupation: Traveling Cook
Mane Color/Style/Length: Short and spikey; skunk colors
Coat Description: Mocha brown
Eye Shape/Color: Orange/Red
Accessories: Anklets and armbands that provide heat and cold resistance as well as masking his powers.
Allegiance: In hiding, wants nothing to do with the responsibilities of being immortal
Cutie Mark: None (says it's because he has no magic, it's actually a circle representing the planet he's on)
Special Talent: Cooks outwardly (can control planetary events as Alicorn such as earthquakes or forming lands/canyons)
Family: None (Luna, Celestia, Crystalis)
Friends: Few
Personality: Always making jokes and highly sexual personality but can be a fierce fighter; refuses to use magic at all costs and is willing to lose friends and family to keep his secret.
Flaws: Can be overly suggestive sexually and has a problem being serious. Prefers to focus on one task at a time and has a poor attention span.
[Character History]
Mocha is from earth, just as his 'sisters' are. They were in a warring nation that tested a new nuclear type weapon over the city they were training in sending them (and several hundred others) to Equestria. They were quickly taken as prisoners by the dominant life forms on the planet at the time; Diamond Dogs. Being used for slave labor and breeding with local ponies creating the three races; most of the original prisoners died or were killed after having several sets of foals who were indoctrinated into their new society as servitors to their owners.
Mocha, Celestia, and Luna created a rebellion with several younger ponies that quickly turned into a full uprising sending the Diamond Dogs into hiding beneath the ground; searching for gems to build weapons at first, then after generations gems became simple greed. Crystalis hid in the shadows and after the rebellion ran away and hid, just as Mocha did.
Learning to use his magic after he was freed he was able to channel the earth into his body to create hills and fertilize the land; after a few hundred years he and the others had mastered their powers then began to teach the local ponies about agriculture and creating a non-nomadic civilization.
Mocha grew nervous of his powers and abilities and tried to warn his 'sisters' about the dangers they could cause. Being ignored he began to seek ways to return to earth. A thousand years passed before he decided to start a family of his own and leave the world to its own devices.
[Powers List]
As an earth pony; enhanced strength and stamina; good with growing food and helping animals as needed.
As an Alicorn (will resist as all costs, even living under Discord's rule): control the earth, terrain, and begin a rotation that negates the primary powers of Celestia and Luna. Can sense movement on the ground for five miles and in the air for one mile. Can cancel teleportation spells that originate within 1/4 mile. Can negate magic on up to any three creatures for up to five minutes; depending on magic ability. (Celestial sisters would be about 30 seconds while a fully powered Tirek would be 5 seconds)
Do you planing to write a story about this?
Because it's sounds intresting.
3345735
Yes, but I just can't wrap my mind around the magnitude of it. Should an OC really have a multi-chapter story?
I don't want to sound conceited.
3345741
There are a lot good story, whit avatar OC-s as main focus.
If the story need it you need to write more then one chapter, it doesn't matter if the main character is an OC.
The only important thing in the lenght of a fic is the story you are trying to tell, don't rush it and don't strech it.
i can definitely agree with the 'highly sexual personality'
3345957
Omg, you couldn't stay away from that?
*crys
Wtf just happens to my mind TOO MUCH, TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
TOO MUCH!!!
Sun Struck needs more......
Ware pony
Dateing Storm
Cold resistant
Need to fill the gap.
Ahh, you HAVE SO MUCH EXPLAINING TO DO!!!!!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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3346107
Okay, here's everything you need to know.
I ... ack.
*passed out from being asked to many random questions
Please leave a message after the beep; auto delete activated.
3346110
So is this more the plot line to the story...?
3346099 nope, it was too easy
3346110
I do have a question though...
Your Cutie mark... Confuses me...