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  • 3 weeks
    Deleted Scene from the upcoming chapter to The Last Alicorn WARNING: SPOILERS

    "You would have never woken up because you'd be dead!"  Applejack snapped back which caused Sapphire to immediately pull back and stare at the farm mare in shock. "Oh consarn it, I wasn't supposed to tell ya that!" Applejack exclaimed and immediately covered her face with her hat.

    "What do you mean by that?" Sapphire asked, her face riddled with concern as she spoke.

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  • 4 weeks
    FFV...Bartz does what he wants.

    *Equips Bartz with singer and goes into battle*

    "Okay, lets try The Mighty March for Regen!"

    *Song misses 3 of the 4 party members*

    "Wut? Okay lets try Romeo's ballad to put stop on my foes!"

    *Song misses every single enemy*

    3 songs later...

    "Wow, Bartz as Bard sucks! Most of his songs miss or do jack!"

    *Has him cast Swift Etude*

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  • 4 weeks
    So i'm playing FFV Pixel Remaster when...

    Aww dang, Galuf! This part is always sad but i remember what's coming from my last blog on this game on the steam version of FFV Advanced

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  • 5 weeks
    Readers: WHERE'S THE CHAPTER?! Me: Well....

    Being the finale(but not the end of the book series) of The Last Alicorn: Book 1: Purpose, i've been rewriting parts of the chapter and deleting other parts over and over because I want this finale to be as epic as I'm imagining it. This is why the chapter is taking so long to come out^^;

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  • 6 weeks
    Don't worry, I'm not going dark again!

    In fact the current chapter i'm working on is sitting at 6k words but I do want to give a word of warning that in a month's time dawntrail will drop and while I'll still try to update my stories still, the new expansion will have the majority of my attention. So with that said, I'll hopefully have the new chapter out within a few days!

    You guys cool with that?

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Aug
5th
2015

Heads up and info for those who track and follow "The Last Alicorn: Book One: Purpose" · 7:01am Aug 5th, 2015

This story isn't coming to a close anytime soon BUT "Book One: Purpose" Will be coming to a close and the next part of the story series will be released sometime soon after.

Coming soon to Fimfiction.net...

The Last Alicorn
Book Two: Flight

I certainly hope more people read this story than the last but as with all OC stories, people tend to avoid them for some stupid reason.

Its like the art of originality with MLP is some kind of insult to it or something.:ajbemused:

Another thing is that most reads of "Book One: Purpose" will have most likely noticed by now is that each chapter isn't directly connected to another in any major continuity aside from the main characters and the events that transpire around and to them.

THIS IS NOT A MISTAKE ON MY PART.

I wanted each chapter to operate interdependently from one another but still connect in a "Episode" kind of fashion.

Sadly this writing style has done me no favors in scoring a bigger audience than what I have so far. So for "Book Two: Flight" I'll be reverting to the tried and true method I use when I write:

Each chapter's events directly connecting to one another so that the character's transition from "location A" to "location B" isn't so jarring to the reader. A bit of a spoiler but the majority of Book Two will be taking place in Pegasus Territory. :twilightblush:

I'm a little saddened to be forced to revert to this writing style as the freedom of sending the character to any given location without being forced to provide an "In between" transition chapter and or events was really nice and allowed me to send them anywhere I wanted but I know readers don't like the "abrupt transition" style as it works ten times better in video than it does in writing.

With that said, its my fond hope more people will get interested in my "The Last Alicorn" story series. :twilightsmile:

Oh and also, a proof reader would be awesome!

Till next time,

Comments ( 1 )

I so hope the heat stays low so you can write more. haven't had anything to read in a long time. too bad you gotta change your style i liked it it fit with her trying to learn everything she needed and moved the story along, tho more chapters does appeal to me so not a total loss ^^

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