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  • 3 weeks
    Deleted Scene from the upcoming chapter to The Last Alicorn WARNING: SPOILERS

    "You would have never woken up because you'd be dead!"  Applejack snapped back which caused Sapphire to immediately pull back and stare at the farm mare in shock. "Oh consarn it, I wasn't supposed to tell ya that!" Applejack exclaimed and immediately covered her face with her hat.

    "What do you mean by that?" Sapphire asked, her face riddled with concern as she spoke.

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  • 4 weeks
    FFV...Bartz does what he wants.

    *Equips Bartz with singer and goes into battle*

    "Okay, lets try The Mighty March for Regen!"

    *Song misses 3 of the 4 party members*

    "Wut? Okay lets try Romeo's ballad to put stop on my foes!"

    *Song misses every single enemy*

    3 songs later...

    "Wow, Bartz as Bard sucks! Most of his songs miss or do jack!"

    *Has him cast Swift Etude*

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  • 4 weeks
    So i'm playing FFV Pixel Remaster when...

    Aww dang, Galuf! This part is always sad but i remember what's coming from my last blog on this game on the steam version of FFV Advanced

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  • 5 weeks
    Readers: WHERE'S THE CHAPTER?! Me: Well....

    Being the finale(but not the end of the book series) of The Last Alicorn: Book 1: Purpose, i've been rewriting parts of the chapter and deleting other parts over and over because I want this finale to be as epic as I'm imagining it. This is why the chapter is taking so long to come out^^;

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  • 6 weeks
    Don't worry, I'm not going dark again!

    In fact the current chapter i'm working on is sitting at 6k words but I do want to give a word of warning that in a month's time dawntrail will drop and while I'll still try to update my stories still, the new expansion will have the majority of my attention. So with that said, I'll hopefully have the new chapter out within a few days!

    You guys cool with that?

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May
21st
2024

Deleted Scene from the upcoming chapter to The Last Alicorn WARNING: SPOILERS · 10:14pm May 21st

"You would have never woken up because you'd be dead!"  Applejack snapped back which caused Sapphire to immediately pull back and stare at the farm mare in shock. "Oh consarn it, I wasn't supposed to tell ya that!" Applejack exclaimed and immediately covered her face with her hat.

"What do you mean by that?" Sapphire asked, her face riddled with concern as she spoke.

"I don't know if i should be sayin' anythin' but the cats out of the bag so I may as well tell ya…" Applejack began. "We're a little more than spirit guides to you and your friend. Guardian angels more like. What ya don't know is that while you were slumped over like a half-dead changeling is that some royal guards happened upon ya and if not for me appearin' when I did, would have most likely done ya six feet under. Trouble is, each of us can only do somethin' like that once and not on demand either so don't go thinkin' the next time your life is on the line one of us is gonna come to your rescue because it doesn't work that way." Applejack explained calmly.

"So everytime each one of you has appeared to help me or Snowbreeze…" Sapphire began but trailed off as the realization hit her.

"We did somethin' that saved your lives, ya. For example, remember when your friend told you about the pony being executed live on stage in Manehattan? Well Pinkie made it so your friend couldn't be seen." The farm pony began.

"So that pony's brother really would have-"  

"Nah, he still wouldn't have said anything even if he could have seen her but a Snow White Pegasus in a crowd of multicolored ponies? She'd stick out like a sore thumb and the Dark Horn wouldn't have needed him to find her in that crowd. Funny thing is, originally we were supposed to only help you and you alone but once that Pegasus came into the picture the powers that be realized you needed her as much as she needed you so we sent two ponies she could most likely relate to to help and protect her. Problem now is, our divine intervention so-to-speak is nearly tapped out. After me, there's only one pony left who can protect and guide you and I don't even know when or how that's gonna happen." Applejack explained and sighed heavily.

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The reason for the removal of this scene was that after a night's sleep and looking over the draft i realized I didn't want to take it in this direction. I want the reason for the mane six ponies appearing to remain a mystery for a little longer and I didn't want this to be explanation for their appearances either as i felt it would cheapen their impact on the story.

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