I love psychology and writing. I tend to write origional/experimental stories. I am the head of the School for New Writers and the EFNW writing track. My new favorite quote is "Why so ˈsir-ē-əs?"
There are a few things I need to work on, I need to move my mic, be less ADHD, and speak slower, but I was surprisingly happy with the lets play as I kept it with little or no downtime.
Hello all,
It's been a while but here is the short version. I worked myself almost to death for a year, all I really have to show for it is some stupid shirts.
The last few months I've been taking it lightly but now that I've distressed some this is what my plans are.
Hey all,
I have a Sunset shimmer Fic ready to go out after one final edit. If anyone has a free hour or so and is decent at grammatical issues I would appreciate the help. The fic itself should be out over the weekend or next Monday.
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I can lend a hand. Won't be able to get to it until tonight (central time US), but I'd be happy to look it over.
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Thank you!
I'll take a look at it if you'd like.
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Go to town
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So, after ya'lls feedback I went back and rewrote the middle (which included expanding it) in addition to the other sections. I think it's ready for a second pass and I'd really appreciate it, especially as it grew to be a larger fic.
3288885 I gave it a proof- and pre-reading and I think your changes work really well. There's a lot of improvement in the middle section. The telling that was there before is replaced with a lot more showing and I found myself feeling much more engaged as a reader.
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"YAY!" said the author.