Derpy, Pinkie Pie, Sweetie Belle, Chrysalis. Myself, summed up in four MLP characters. I'm a deeply flawed individual, but if you can get past that, I'm sure we can be the best of friends.
What can I do to improve the story? This can range from anything to tips about how I write, to the pacing of the story, to character development... Anything, really.
One thing to keep in mind is that I have two (maybe three if push comes to shove) more chapters left in the story, and then it'll be done and I'll be onto writing the sequel. So... yeah.
Also Derpy.
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That's a weird Valentine.
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I wouldn't even mind if I got that Valentine from her. Just getting one would be enough.
Déjà vu...
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I think I know what you mean, but just for clarification... What do you mean by that?
3232160 Haven't got a chance to read the last chapter yet. Just implying that carrying on the plots could be a good idea.
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I had a fight scene to wrap up in last chapter but I also did a little more plot exposition, and everything's setting up for the finale (which should be in two chapters, not including the short epilogue I have planned).