anybody want a preview of the next Nightmare's Return chapter? · 11:12pm Jun 17th, 2015
“Our second welcome into this castle went much smoother than the first, do you not think?” Twilight hadn't stopped to think that there were any females in the Changeling Nation, other than Chrysalis herself. All of her research had pointed towards the entire brood coming from Chrysalis herself, so she had assumed that the rest of the brood had been male.
Somewhat shortsighted, she was now seeing.
“You caught us off-guard this time,” Twilight responded, “but don't think that your arrival this time is any more well-heralded than the first. You are still not welcome here- not you, not your Queen, and certainly not your warriors.”
“Warriors? This is merely my envoy. Notice they have not come after you yet? That is because these have not been trained to fight. They are the royal escorts of my Queen and her trusted Ones- myself included in that, obviously, as is Adriu, the other whom you have already spoken with.”
“So then speak. No one is attacking you, and no one will, save on my command.” Twilight dipped her head, as the others' jaws collectively dropped. “Why are you here?”
“To negotiate a trade. Your friend... for your queen.”
This looks rather raw, but it has direction. That's good.
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well I'm only about a quarter of the way through the chapter at the moment, so yeah...