Short Story Long, My Fic Got In!

And I went and posted it without waiting for a response from my pre-readers.

Sorry guys, I didn't know what was up.

I guess it's fine since they'd read the old draft while I've been re-tooling and overhauling the gist of it. Short attention span over here. I have a feeling whatever complaints they would have told me, I've corrected them in this draft. Plus, it got in. I guess before I kept trying to hit all the notes on my outline and got distracted by the details. Fun fact: The old title was Likeness as in a model's likeness. It was cheesy and deserved to be changed. As of now, I think the story is much better of it. I'm tempted to slap a romance tag on it right now but I dunno the same way Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy don't know.

I don't usually do the romance tag so now you see how fluffy-feeling this thing is. I don't do fluffy.

Nah, it's kinda summer-ish.

I'll probably never bring it up in story but Rainbow Dash is 18 while Fluttershy is 19. Of all the things, Dash totally accepts in a weird way dislikes about Fluttershy, it's the fact that she came into this world faster than her. Of all things Fluttershy wishes that Dash might nicer do, she wonders how life would have been if she'd been born first. Would they've still met under the same circumstance?

God, I've made myself sick.