Redoing

I've decided to start re-writing some of my older stories since my writing has improved and make them better. I'm going to start doing this with a lot of my old stories and the story that I started out with was Book Club. So it's rewritten with the same story idea and it's all fixed up. If you see any grammar errors or anything like that, tell me so in a comment. Also, tell me what you think about it! Feedback is always appreciated.