Fixing up a chapter

So, I fixed up the recent chapter of Metroid, Displaced in Equestria. I added a cliffhanger so people don't think the story is over yet (it isn't), and I fixed up other things. I might fix up some other chapters later, and try not to write chapters at 10pm at night (my writing becomes monotone at that point). So, sorry about how terrible my story has turned, I'm kinda rushing through so I can work on another story. That story will probably be better than this one because this one was a spur of the moment, and the one(s) I'm making involve a bit of thinking ahead (and the ability to imagine a voice for each character).