R4 (Reactions, Reviews, Reference, Redirection) #0123 · 3:23pm Apr 30th, 2015
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Here are five slightly edited old reviews:
Epiphany by Ninestempest
Burning Bridges by Ninestempest
Pink Dream by Ninestempest
The Gift That Keeps On Giving by Pascoite
Love by Proxy by Pascoite
Epiphany by Ninestempest
[story link] [my original review]
Ugh. Couldn’t even get halfway through this one. The writing is just so rough and not-good. I even gave it a few second chances, putting it down and reading something for a while, then coming back. Nope. I finally just put it down when the third chapter is a flashback in a flashback. Go read Faith for what is basically the same story by the same author, but much better quality. Plus that one has changelings, which is always neat.
Burning Bridges by Ninestempest
[story link] [my original review]
Some nice fluffy romance. Needed more build-up. Would have loved to get more of the romance leading up to the big trouble in this story, but I liked it quite a bit.
Pink Dream by Ninestempest
[story link] [my original review]
Interesting. Decent story, cool premise, but not amazing.
The Gift That Keeps On Giving by Pascoite
[story link] [my original review]
Decent story. Pinkie Pie seemed out of character though. I just can’t see her getting this worked up and frustrated and depressed over something like this. Twilight, sure. Rarity, absolutely. Fluttershy, heck, that was in the show with Philomena. Pinkie is much more upbeat. Even if she got all depressed while trying to figure out the cake, I would have figured she would have popped back to her cheerful self when she figured out what her gift to the princesses was going to be.
Love by Proxy by Pascoite
[story link] [my original review]
This is a really good start to a slightly longer romance. Well-written, the characters all are, well, in-character without being exaggerated. Recommended for anyone who likes little slice-of-life romances, though no actual romance happens in the story. Just really wish this was chapter one of a longer story. Lots of implied characterization that I’d love to see get explored further.
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