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The unicorn sat with his little filly by the fireplace and opened the book once more. "Let's see what happens next!"

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  • 22 weeks
    Black Feather Project Update

    The last month has been pretty crazy. My dog got a massive bladder infection and I had to spend $2000 on vet bills to get an ultrasound and all the nonsense that goes with that, all to get a prescription for $30 worth of medicine to fix the situation. Been kinda busy with that as well as upcoming holiday planning, etc.

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  • 25 weeks
    One more rewritten chapter

    Hey everyone.

    Well, that last chapter took 3 weeks of hard work, mostly design, but nobody has commented on it so I can't tell how anyone feels about the story so far. I'm hoping people can share their thoughts because it helps me to know how the story is being received.

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  • 27 weeks
    Some great design work

    Greetings, Black Feather fans!

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  • 29 weeks
    More new characters

    I've recently finished a scene where Dinky gets to know one of the platoon members. I find Dinky's POV to be fascinating to write, though all the Dinky POV scenes will be brand new content (for you old fans out there) because Dinky wasn't previously written into this part of the story. She's a fun character to see the world through. Innocent and naïve, happily venturing into things that

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  • 31 weeks
    Sergeant A.Pone

    Alright, it's time for a shift of tone.

    I had a pretty long chat with Duvet yesterday, and we decided that chapter eleven really does need a thorough rework from the 2018 version. This is the last of what I'd call my "weak writing". Chapters 12-21 are pretty much perfect, so if I can fix 11, this is going to mean great things for the story.

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Apr
26th
2015

Tanks for the MLP details · 3:43am Apr 26th, 2015

Well, I just watched Episode 5: Tanks for the Memories (where in the opening scene I half-wondered if Tank might die, illustrating the importance of coping with pet death for kids, but then again, that's kind of dark). So, what interesting observations can be made in this twenty minute (ten, if you discount the crying and irrational attempt at sabotage) look into the MLP universe?


Rainbow Dash: Tank Commander

First... Cloudsdale moves!! Wow, this is kind of cool. I mean, yes it makes sense that it would be mobile, being a cloud city and all. But I've always gotten the impression that it was in a fixed position, especially since it's right there on the official map. The possibilities for using this mechanic in fics is pretty cool.

Second... Ponyville is next up for winter? Does winter rotate around Equestria? What a fascinating concept because it completely disconnects the idea of winter being associated with "time of year". It also justifies why we haven't seen winter in Ponyville since season two. Although, I do think this may simply be a case of the writers simply not giving a flip about continuity. After all, Fall Weather Friends is two episodes after Winter Wrapup in season one, and winter seems to come and go in a single episode (place your bets on whether it will still be winter in episode six). Also, Rainbow Dash gets Tank in season two episode seven, where Hearth's Warming Eve is four episodes later in episode eleven! Dash acts like this is Tank's first winter with her. *sigh* Sadly, I think this might be what's actually happening, and we, the fanfiction writers, are spinning plates trying to make rational sense of it all.

Still, the concept of a localized winter that comes more or less based on "when it's your town's turn" is absolutely fascinating, and has a lot of potential in fics. It also heavily implies that years don't necessarily work the same way as they do for us. Are annual holidays actually annual? Does Nightmare Night always happen in the autumn? Does Hearth's Warming Eve always happen in the winter? And if it does, perhaps it isn't even an annual event. Maybe it's Hearth's Warming in Ponyville at a different time of year than in Manehattan. How does the passage of time even work in Equestria? Does this perhaps explain why the CMC still have yet to get their cutie marks? Maybe four years haven't actually passed for them since the show started!

On a related note, we've seen the moon go down and the sun come up from the same spot that the moon just went down. Forget that silly rising in the east business. All bets seem to be off in Equestria.

Further Observations:

* Fluttershy the veterinarian is adorable. It's also good to see her not cowering when yelled at, though it's bad to see her get yelled at.
* Dragons don't "have to hibernate", but don't they sometimes take hundred-year naps?
* Spike has a bucket of crystals on the floor of the castle presumably for eating. Curious: could Spike eat the castle itself?
Also, Spike's bedroom.
* Dash gets her own "I've lost my mind" episode. cf Somepony to Watch Over Me, Lesson Zero, Inspiration Manifestation, Party of One, Putting Your Hoof Down.
* Who's on First?
* Lightning storage room!
* Wilhelm Scream *sigh* will that ever be retired? People who know what it is can't not notice it.
* Rainbow Dash slippers.
* Applejack: Wrong pony for sympathy. Did Twilight not already know this? lol

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Comments ( 3 )

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Also, Hi :pinkiehappy:

Looks like you got a good script to make a cool review. Very impressive.

Second... Ponyville is next up for winter? Does winter rotate around Equestria?

Er...I took it to mean next in line; as in, there's a scheduled order winter is brought to Equestria every year.

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