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Taialin


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    Rarity has found a new hobby in meditating with Fluttershy, and through months of practice, she's not only learned how to listen to nature, but also how to read ponies and the inner feelings they hide. But she never wanted to read her best friend.
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Apr
22nd
2015

Flarity "L" Series: Update · 10:04pm Apr 22nd, 2015

Hey, guys. It's been a while, hasn't it? There are a number of reasons for that, though the fact that finals season is here is probably the most significant one. For that reason, I have to update you on the status of the Flarity "L" Series, namely that the final in the series must be moved back a couple of weeks. Sorry!

   Listen    >  Language  >   Lust  
Friday, February 20 > Friday, March 20 > Friday, May 8

Rest assured, barring any unexpected circumstances, I shouldn't have to push back the release date of Lust any more than I already have. But in the meantime, have some info and a little teaser for the story below the break!


As you may be able to tell from the title, Lust will be a Mature rated story. Just a heads-up if you want to finish the series but have "View Mature" turned off in your settings. The story will involve explicit description of sex, but it will not be "sex for the sake of sex." Those looking for a quick Flarity tryst may be disappointed.

Here's a snippet from Chapter 4 to whet your appetite a little:

I look down, averting my eyes from Fluttershy. "You deserve somepony better than me."

Fluttershy's hoof coaxes my head back up. Reluctantly, I do so. The expression on her face is stern, almost angry. My eyes are drawn to hers; they flash with intent, and they contain a fierce burning fire within. They're almost hypnotizing in their depths. I'm not unwilling to look away from her; I'm utterly unable to. I can't even blink. She's captured by complete attention, and she won't release it until I hear what she has to say. Her tone of voice is one that I've never heard directed at me before: commanding.

"Don't say that, Rarity; don't you ever say that again. I've loved you at a distance for years. I don't care what problems we may have. There is nopony out there whom I would be happier with than you." Her eyes are unblinking, and they drill into me until her words can come behind them and make their way to the deepest recesses of my brain.

I can do nothing but nod dumbly. Fluttershy closes her eyes and furrows her brow a little. Finally, I'm able to take my eyes away from her, and I release the breath I didn't know I was holding. The exchange must not have lasted more than a few seconds, but it felt far longer to me.

When I look back to her, her eyes are back to their soft, compassionate appearance. There's not a hint on her face that she reprimanded me mere seconds before. In a weak and small voice, I say, "O-okay."

"Good," she says softly back. A small smile has appeared on her face. She starts rubbing my back again. "Please don't be scared of me. I just wanted you to know." She licks my face tenderly.

I nod again and draw a little closer to Fluttershy's body. I don't think that I could ever be able to fear her, but she can be incredibly . . . convincing when she wants to. "I know now," I say, and a small smile of my own grows on my face.
Fluttershy retreats for just long enough to find my lips and give them another soft kiss. I open my mouth and let her in, but she doesn't immediately dive in and explore my mouth. She advances slowly and only goes as far as my tongue. She pushes gently against it, and I push back. I moan softly in satisfaction.

We separate again. She pats her chest a few times and invites me to rest my head on it. When I do, she covers my body with a warm wing and strokes a hoof through my mane. I didn't think that Fluttershy would ever be the one to take charge here, but it seems that when I show weakness, her maternal side reveals itself to take care of me. Fluttershy can be very assertive when she wants to—especially so when her marefriend gives her a reason to be as such.

"Thank you, sweetheart," I say slowly.

"You're welcome," she replies, brushing a forelock out of my face.

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Comments ( 3 )

3007919
Quite possibly. I already have an editor, but she's quite busy with said finals season. I can't, in good conscience, really let this story go up unedited either, given that this is actually the first time I've ever written something explicitly sexual.

3008359 as it turns out, I have a few people who help with that.

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