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  • 261 weeks
    First Big Edit Spree

    So a few chapters are done and edited. To explain some changes, Spike and Nashta are now wingless properly, so a lot has changed in the series of events involving them. Sombra is more of a consistent dick rather than a spastic one with a lot clearer goals and better transitions/interactions. I'd love it if ya'll checked it out.

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  • 262 weeks
    I guess im fixing that old story

    Im alive, question is, was I ever dead in the first place?

    I hear all the problems my writing has. I like to think I've gotten better. So Im taking the stuff there now and revising a lot in as few sessions as possible to keep the mentality I need to have consistent action and motivations. I got super off track with what the story was and want to fix that.

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  • 331 weeks
    So since Fim won't update y'all

    New chapter up. Revision on the old one. Fim doesn't want to spam inboxes since its publish date was back in june...like two years ago. Finally back into it. Who knows where it goes from here, but I feel like there might be a small difference in my writing styles...

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  • 375 weeks
    It's almost Easter

    You all know what that meeeans...

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  • 407 weeks
    Recent chapter

    It sucked. It made me realized I had a huge continuity error and it tore my whole plot apart. Im going to rewrite it and adjust that plot to fit the error so that it wont change the whole story. Im very sorry for being so late admitting this. I was afraid of failing and just ignored it, praying it wouldnt be noticed. Im a bad guy. But I'll be working hard to fix it! Taking the chapter down for

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Apr
16th
2015

A small preview. . . · 11:14am Apr 16th, 2015

"Very late for old stallions." Quipped a sudden voice.

Chrysalis shook his head out the day dream and looked to his right, a mare of tall stature and short mane, fetlock fur a tad long and face speaking of hard work, or deceit. A clever girl. . .

"I look old?" He smirked, looking back out at the park.
"Old, but interesting. Old and bitter looking." She jabbed.

Chrysalis let a smirk cross his face and shifted around in his seat.

"Well aren't you a fireball. What's your name, anyway?"

The mare laughed and looked over at the stallion, eyes like a viper with their cutting edge and dark blue glow. Something about their gaze made even Chrysalis falter. . . only slightly, however.

"My name is Ember. "
Laughing a little, he turned his gaze back to the park just in time to see a changeling catch her fish and run off to the forest with him, a smile coming to his face out of reflex, and just a smidgen of pride.

"Nightly lovers are entertaining, aren't they?" She added.

"Well you see, I like to look at them; they remind me of when I was young."
Ember let out a small laugh and stood up to her hooves, letting her wings shake a little to flatten the feathers out.

"You know who you remind me of?" she started, Chrysalis turning his head and raising a brow. "My father; and he was a very intense stallion. Always thinking about the past and forgetting the future." She ended with a slightly bitter tone.

Easy Chrissy. . . This just got a little complicated.

Walking around, behind the stallion, she sat once again to his left, much closer than before.

"And you have this air about you. . . Mature, old, but far from feeble." She said with a wistful edge.

"And you have a dangrous air. . ." Chrysalis retorted, flashing another confident smirk.

"Well, you are playing with fire, are you not?"


Tags include incest? Eggseggseggs, some serious transformations, transgender, brainwashing, a little bdsm, and just a tiny bit of blood. . . Im including a lot of stuff on my personal list this time around, so it should get juicy. ;3

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