Apr
15th
2015
just a thought · 2:59am Apr 15th, 2015
Hey guys I was just wondering and I actually want to hear from you. Do you actually like the story well. What things can I fix to make this story better for you. I want to hear what you people have to say before I continue. But I also thought maybe hearing things from you guys would help inspire me and make me write fast but efficiently. That is all I have to say and again I am a terrible person who can't keep track of time and get chapters for you peeps. Then again it might be for the better, cause it could be a bad chapter and with your help I could try to make it better. But now I will say farewell and I hope to hear from you, I really appreciate your support, it helps me feel relieved that I am not a bad writer, so see ya. :)
I can't really remember what the story is about. I'll go read it real quick then get back to you.
Okay. Your story is, by my standards, a good one. The pacing is a little quick but not to the point where it ruins the story. To be honest the story is a little boring. There are two ways to fix this. Add a little romance. Not like full on romance where they're in love and getting it on in like one day. Maybe just some hinted romance at first then developing it later on. The second way is with action. Whether the action is Ponyville being attacked or a mission for the Princesses. I'll let you decide that. As far as knowing whether a chapter is bad or not, you'll just have to upload it and let the comments tell you whether or not it was a bad chapter.
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Well i like your Story so far but like Parker said some Romance or Action would not be bad
what's very ironic is that i was going to add some of that stuff in my story anyways, but it's great that i got to hear it from you guys, so now i know that Im on the right track. :)
lol its funny how u knew what to add b4 hand