New Record · 11:54am Mar 31st, 2015
I managed to write an entire scene with Big Macintosh without once mentioning his penis. A personal best!
If you like my writing you can encourage it.
I managed to write an entire scene with Big Macintosh without once mentioning his penis. A personal best!
Did you at least refer to it implicitly, or cover some other sexual characteristic of his to compensate?
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No!
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Yeesh. At this rate, you may as well change the story rating to "everyone". I mean, really.
Little victories.
THEN WHERE AM I SUPPOSED TO GO FOR IT?! NOW I'LL HAVE TO SETTLE FOR SOME SECOND RATE HACK INSTEAD OF THE MASTER!
Seriously though, you have the best execution of this premise that I've seen and you actually managed to do the impossible: make Trixie an almost relatable, even somewhat "likable," character to me. Your use of unreliable narration is very good and used to much comedic effect.
I hope that we will get to see new chapters soon. Is there anything any of us could do to assist? Your story is a rare treat and your chapter about the Royal Sisters was hilarious yet still in voice.