Tears in the Snow re-edits again.

Heyo readers me again, sorry for the insane influx of blogs, I don't really enjoy posting these as often as one might think. Now to get to the point, I am re-editing Tears in the Snow again this time I am re-editing chapters one to four, re-visiting my screw ups and spelling errors and the story in its infancy before chapter five. I originally just edited Chapters five to seven and from that point on I started editing as I wrote, or before I published. With the edits to Chapter 1, I added additional dialogue, such as Twilight's reason to take a train, why the conductor wouldn't let Nyx on the train. I removed all references to Doctor Whooves but I left one subtle one that was plain before the re-edit. I will continue these edits as the week continues. three more chapters to re-edit, one day at a time.