Feb
23rd
2015
The Book 2 Revision has Begun! · 8:25pm Feb 23rd, 2015
Alright folks, this is how this is gonna work. Every day this week, I will post two revised chapters, though due to my own schedule I can't really give you a solid time table of when those chapters will be out (missing a week of college on account of hell freezing over really screwed my work pattern mindset, to say the least), but generally I'll try to upload the AM chapters before noon, and the PM chapters before 4 PM, working off of Eastern Standard Time. I also will put up blog posts each day after both of the day's chapters are replaced, to remind folks about it.
So...yeah, Monday AM and PM are now the revised editions, so check 'em out already!
Thanks for the blog post. As feared no notifications when the revisions went up. I'm looking forward to the reread.
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That's actually because the revisions aren't new chapters in so far as I'm just gutting the old chapters and uploading the revised versions in their place. That way I can keep the comments preserved.
2824531 yeah it's a good way of doing it. Just wasn't sure how the system would treat it all. I'm tempered to pull up the old ePub I have for a side by side
So... how major a rewrite are we talking here ?
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Mainly significant clean up on the fluff-to-seriousness factor, a key event or two being plotted out differently during the story, and Razz's overall presence being reduced to fit more in tone with a story being told from Sunset's perspective.
Like, it's not going to change any other story in the 7DSJ lexicon, but as a stand-alone portion it's going to have significant improvements to how it carries the story.