Lyra x Lyra - chapter 2 pre-readers wanted

OK, so it took a little longer than I expected, but chapter 2 is finished now. I'd quite like some people to pre-read it before I press the "Publish" button, and point out any obvious mistakes.

If you'd like to be one of the first to read it, please add a comment to this blog article. I'll PM the password and link to the first four people.

Comments

[Enigmatic Otaku]

I'd be interested

[ShippingIsMagic]

Me 2, please !!!!!

[Sirria]

Sure,why not