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Vivid Syntax


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Feb
18th
2015

You didn't see anything · 4:03am Feb 18th, 2015

So I was going through the first few chapters of Sensation for a little project I'm working on, aaaaand...

Continuity error? What continuity error? Of course Braeburn hasn't been to Las Pegasus before, and he certainly didn't mention seeing a Wonderbolts show there in chapter 4. WHATEVER GAVE YOU THAT IDEA, HM??? He clearly says he saw it in Santa Neigh, and you can't prove that he ever said otherwise!!!

(So, apparently, despite my copious notes, I still miss things from time to time. Be sure to call me out on my mistakes if you see them. Thanks!)

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Reasons I haven't written a story: 101

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I hope that doesn't discourage you. Everybody makes mistakes, and you only get better by trying.

Of course, if you just don't want to write a story, that's a pretty good reason, too. :rainbowlaugh:

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I actually have a few ideas that I'd like to try out, but there's many reasons for me not doing so. (At least not now.)

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Well, when you put the pen to the paper (or hooves to the keyboard), let me know. I'd love to check out what you've got. :pinkiehappy:

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How do I even... Type... Hooves?! Where's mah guitar, I need a play anthropology!

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