Need Eyes On Target · 3:17am Feb 18th, 2015
Hey guys, so I am almost done re-writing the latest chapter and it is much longer than last time. However, I need an extra pair of eyes on this... Or two. Or ten. Yes! Ten cause I really need the help. If you're interested, I ask that you follow the link below and make comments or suggestions, but not actually edit the document. While I do have it saved elsewhere, it would be quite the pain in the flank to have to transfer what I have elsewhere into the document if we make any permanent changes and then re-apply them to the alternate document. Anyway, please leave me a comment here if you decide to follow the link. Be warned, thar be spoilers in them waters and those who ruin the surprise for them land-lubbers will walk the plank (Why a pirate voice? I don't need to explain myself to you!)!
i'd rather wait for a polished version.
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Its actually much better than before, but I'm worried I am getting too wordy or leaving out information that I know, but you guys don't. Its that kind of stuff that is hard to catch.
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well that kind of stuff is fine in my book