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GeodesicDragon


I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. Books are available again; check my userpage for details.

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  • Wednesday
    Collab: Eight Days Left!

    There's just eight days left to join The Two Hundred Words Collab. So far, eleven people - including me - are on board, matching the number who joined the last collab.

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  • 6 days
    Collab Update

    Nine people have signed up since my last blog was posted, and there is still plenty of time to sign up if you are interested in joining. All you need to do is write a measly two hundred words! Easy!

    Sign ups end on May 30th, and I aim to have all entries in by June 13th.

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  • 1 week
    Collab Idea 2: The Collabening

    NUMBER OF PARTICIPANTS: 11 (including me)

    I've decided that I want to write something again, and what better way to do that than to arrange a collab?

    It'll be a sort-of sequel to The One Hundred Words Collab, and will be called - wait for it - The Two Hundred Words Collab. Surprising, I know.

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  • 21 weeks
    Happy Holidays!

    Whatever you're celebrating, and even if you're not celebrating anything, I hope you have a great day today.

    Me? I'm going to spend the day either sleeping, or playing Season of Discovery in World of Warcraft Classic; I've got a guild to run now, after all, and I need to devote as much time as I can to keeping it going.

    Stay awesome.

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  • 43 weeks
    Hey Ho

    First of all, today marks 11 years to the day since I joined Fimfiction. Go me, I guess?

    Secondly, I'm still around, though I've been pretty busy as of late.

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Feb
1st
2015

Chapter Six Preview! · 7:44pm Feb 1st, 2015

To prove that I am actually working on Of Horses And Whorses, here is a sneak peek at the next chapter.

Be advised that it contains a spoiler for a major plot point, so read it at your own risk.

After telling Celestia and Luna your story so far, which included the story of how you came to be Zayna's owner, the two of them are giving you sympathetic looks.

"When Discord was defeated, all traces of his magic were reversed," Celestia says. "However, it would seem as though you and Zayna are the exception. Luna and I have a theory as to why you are still here, but it might seem a little bit... strange."

You shrug. "After everything I've seen here, Princess, 'strange' is hardly something I'm not familiar with."

Celestia chuckles. "Glad to hear it," she replies. "Now, our theory is this: Discord was using his chaos magic to cause various amounts of trouble in Equestria — dancing buffalo, chocolate rain from cotton candy clouds, rabbits that looked more like deer, and so forth." She pauses for a moment to register the look of dumbfounded wonder on your face. "Small spells like those don't require much magic to case, hence why all of them were reversed when he was sealed in stone by Twilight and her friends."

"But using a summoning spell on individuals from another world entirely?" Luna continues. "Now that is something that requires a great deal of magic to cast. We can only guess that Discord summoned you here as a last resort, hoping that your presence in Equestria would continue to cause chaos while he was imprisoned."

"Hmm." you tap your chin. "Well, given all that's happened to us since our arrival, I think he was right." You fold your arms. "The question now, though, is what happens next?"

Luna and Celestia exchange a look with each other.

"Luna and myself are powerful entities in our own right," Celestia says. "But together, the two of us would have enough magic to send you back to your rightful place."

Your eyes light up at this statement and you let out a small cheer, throwing your arms around Zayna's neck. "Did you hear that, Zayna?" you ask. "We can go home!"

"I did hear it, Master." Zayna nuzzles you. "I'm not saying I haven't grown to enjoy my time here, but I'll be glad to get home."

Luna coughs, distracting your joy. "Therein lies the problem." she taps her forehooves together nervously. "Even with our combined powers... we would only be able to send one of you back."

Your face falls as Luna speaks those words, while Zayna's ears flop down mournfully. You look at her, and then to the Princesses a few times before you close your eyes and look at the ground.

"Send me." you sigh. "Let Zayna stay here, and send me back."

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Comments ( 2 )

...?
So they need to send them both at once?
They can't just send one now and the other in a few days?

Misspelled cast for case. Lol just kidding, well not really, but.... Yeah anyways.
It always confuses us when this type of "only one can go" plot point is used, here's to hoping you have a good reason other than "it takes too much power" up your sleeve....

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