Concerning "When Pinkie Pie Actually Took Her Medicine"

I am now aware that when writing my first "When" story, When Pinkie Pie Actually Took Her Medicine, I crossed some lines that shouldn't have been crossed. For this I am very sorry. The following in italics is a comment I posted in reply to those who were offended, it is also the new long description:

I really am sorry for offending anybody. I write comedy fics, so I tend to exaggerate stuff, like Pinkie's "craziness". I really didn't tend to offend anyone, and I'm sorry that I did. More of the story was meant to emphasize the new found sophistication that her character doesn't have. I've been with special-needs people before, and I know it is a serious issue that shouldn't really be made fun of, and it was not my intention to do so with this story. I have had depression before, and I wrote this story while still on medication. I write stuff for comedy purposes, not to make fun of anyone with depression, special needs, or other mental illnesses. Again, writing comedy stuff can tend to lead to exaggeration in bad ways, like this story did, and I am really sorry for offending people. I plan to edit this story or delete it completely to fix my mistakes. Also, I'm terrible at proofreading my own work, but I've gotten better at it, so I will try and fix that when I re-write this. Again, I am very sorry for offending you.

As said above, I will change it soon. If you want to download the original, do it soon. And if you want the original version after it has been changed, message me and I will send you a copy of the original.

Again, I am very sorry for offending anybody, and I hope you can forgive me for doing so.