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MajorFrostwing


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  • 183 weeks
    Long Time Waiting

    I know you guys have been waiting a long time for the new story. over a year of me just trying to balance my home life as a father and writing the story. I have one last story in the S.A.A.B. series before I think I will be closing it forever. It has been a long ride but Other priorities have arisen and I have to step up. My daughter is going to be 3 in February. I still can't believe I am a

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  • 242 weeks
    I'M GETTING MARRIED!

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  • 263 weeks
    Rocky Days

    Sorry I have been so silent with you guys. I have been working on Fractured Darkness but with me being a father and all I'm not able to work on it everyday like I used to. Not to mention my life is going through some crazy changes. When I do finish up the story I will be posting it in quarters. Anyway I hope you all can be happy for me with me being a father and trying to be the best I can for

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  • 304 weeks
    Sooooooo.

    So about a week ago I moved from my home state to my new home to be with my girlfriend our daughter and it has been a hellish start but I am getting the hang of it slowly but surely. Also sorry if any of my fans are from Chicago but fuck your city it made my trip fucking hell. mostly because my car flat out died in your city and now I have to spend fuck loads to get it repaired but my initial

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  • 327 weeks
    Something ACTUALLY Important

    Alright for those of you that don't know... I am going to be a father. And I would never ask you guys to donate to me but I am in a bit of trouble. If you guys are willing to help then I thank you with all of my heart if not it does not matter I never wanted my real life to be posted on here but I do need help.

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Dec
1st
2014

Spoilers That Have Spoiled · 7:16pm Dec 1st, 2014

Ok I will explain to you all what was supposed to be season 2 of a Blind Delight. So sit back and cringe.

It started out with Trevor getting out of the hospital. Basic stuff happened him having a good time living with Cloud Kicker. Nothing could possibly go wrong. (That was until the fire nation attacked)... Shade continued his assault on Trevor's mind to the point of Shade almost taking control of Trevor when someone hit Cloud Kicker. Trevor disappeared leaving Ponyville behind in order to find a solution to Shade and finally be rid of him.

Trevor had some help in his travels from some ponies he saved. Maybe he went to far on that last one resulting in him getting poisoned. The country he ended up waking up in was the pony equivalent of Japan. He then found out that the woman he had saved was the Shogun's wife. Trevor explained his blight to him and he might have came up with a solution sending him off to the shrine maiden. He went of course but she couldn't help him only saying that he was cursed with some type of demon. Trevor was out of chances in his mind what else was there to do he couldn't stop Shade from killing him and taking over his mind and body. Trevor decided there was only one last thing to do go to the highest point and cast himself off it. He was shown the way toward a mountain where he met someone that said they might be able to help him with his problem. Trevor agreed.

Fast forward 6 years and we find Trevor is still alive and a lot better. He had a new master of swordsmanship who taught him to use his own life energy as a weapon. Combining both his style and this new style had created a new form of fighting. He even unlocked and mastered the final stance of his style. He followed his master back to the Shogun to thank him for all of his support and help only to hear everything in chaos. He was informed that Equestria had fallen to an unknown enemy. With a new purpose and anger fueling him he took the first ship to Equestria.

Trevor fought through armies and enemies for only one purpose. Save everyone or die trying. He finally found out who the main enemy was. One King Sombra the master of fear and shadows. Trevor made his way to Canterlot liberating every city he walked through of Sombra's grip. Finally making it to Canterlot trying to find some way to take out Sombra and save everyone when someone stopped him. His master had finally caught up to him bringing with him an army and a gift. Since their meeting his old mask was shattered the master gave him a new mask telling him. "What they don't see they fear. What you don't see makes you strong." Trevor took the mask before leading the charge on the city.

The city only lasted 1 day under the onslaught of Trevor and his master. Trevor entered the castle challenging the Tyrant King to a fight. He accepted and the fight ensued ending in a final strike by both of them. Trevor was able to cleave Sombra in half killing him but Trevor was not lucky in the fight. Trevor had a section of his stomach cut out. Trevor had saved the entire country of Equestria by killing Sombra but at the cost of his own life.

Trevor awoke in a strange room with hundreds of pictures littering the walls of him all through his life. That's when the owner of the room showed up. It was Trevor's father Gregory Garris. Heart warming scene ensues but before Trevor could pass on with his father he is stopped by his father. Apparently it was not his time he had someone waiting for him to wake up. Trevor was brought back to the world of the living where he heard Cloudkicker crying for him. Another heart warming scene and lots of smacking. Celestia entered the room with the rest of Trevor's friends. She demanded an answer as to why he disappeared for all those years. He explained the reasoning as to why he left telling them it was for their protection. They understood and forgave him. More heartwarming BS.

Fast forward a little more and Trevor is laying next to Cloudkicker they had gotten married and had adopted 2 fillies a colt and a mare. Trevor ends the story with his own little monologue basically saying that everything to him just so happens to be a delight for a blind guy and he wouldn't change any of it for the world.

There you guys go a rough cut of my memory on how the story went. I don't know if it would have held up to season 1 but I did make this one a little more action packed until the end when Trevor finally returned. Now I don't want a lot of comments saying that if I remember this much just re-write the story. No. Each chapter was about 10K words each and spanned about 26 chapters. This was supposed to be my longest work yet and I only had one chapter left before it was finished and the post could have begun. Fate takes a swift kick in my direction to stop me. I would love to write the next arc but I can't the amount of time I poured into it was 3 months of continuous work. I only left my house to go to work and buy food. My life revolved around this story and I can't do that right now with my new work load and with me moving at the end of the month. But I might come back and write a new season 2. Anyway I am Major Frostwing and you are dismissed.

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Comments ( 3 )

That would have been a good story.

WHY FATE WHY!!!!!!:raritycry:

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I might re-write it but it will take me a while since it took me 3 months before just to get it all done. I also don't start posting a story until I am done writing it.

2627382 Take all the time you need. :pinkiehappy:

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