PLEASE any good editors?

This is annoying. I got one chapter done, another almost done, but still no editor. My brother, who said he will help, has only gone over the first two pages of the first chapter, and that was six days ago. My other editor I'm not angry with, since he's VERY busy, and with work and such, I understand his situation. But, I've also contacted an editing group here, but they've not contacted me back yet.

So if any of you are good editors, meaning you notice when ponies are out of character, can tell me when I'm telling and not showing, or plot inconsistincies and such, let me know. I can't upload these until they are edited.

Comments

[Alticron]

If you want, I could give it a shot. I edit a fair amount of fanfics on this site.

[Yonah21]

2480126 I will send you a link to the first chapter. As you should probably know, there are spoilers involved if you look at it.

[Alticron]

2480130 Sure thing.