Foals Update · 8:38am Sep 15th, 2014
I've made several changes to the 'pilot chapter' and may in the future cut it into two chapters. As it stands, these are some of the changes I decided to act upon.
1.) Made a little more detail in regards to the trans-dimensional gateways linking human Earth with pony Earth.
2.) Pinkie's two scenes and interactions with the characters have been removed.
3.) Any references to MDC have been removed. This will be a stand-alone story of its own right.
4.) I am considering moving 'An Immortal Price' to this story as a prologue. Both stories are linked. If you haven't read it, please do. It will help readers understand Celestia's character a bit better in this story.
5.) I've decided humans will be background characters, with the exception of Harold, who will be a minor character.
If anyone has any questions or concerns, please address them here and I'll do my best to answer them without giving away any spoilers!
Would love an explaination why the 'Human' tag gives the story an automatic downvote from the people who downvote it. Stop being mysanthropes. Without people, we wouldn't have MLP:FiM.
Alot of people dont like the human tag cause some (not me) find them too easy to write and dotn take that much skill. I personally dont gove a shit
will need to re-re-read the first one...
Glad to see you removed those 2 Pinkie parts. Was really the only thing that bog down the chapter. Also if anyone gives you crap because of the human tag you should tell 'em ta suck it go home!
2462298 I really don't write Pinke all that much and thought it would be a neat way to show how I write her, but too much is still too much.
2462304 "A swing and a miss" as some would say though as it is I've seen a LOT of people misuse Pinkie MUCH worse. Just felt a little forced in my opinion.