Fixed Chapter Two · 4:24am Sep 10th, 2014
There. I did it. I got rid of the fourth wall break. I'll never do anything like that again because people clearly don't like it. I apologize for attempting to make it work.
Bleh,
-Derply
P.S. I'm slowly fixing my screwy tense problem before I post the next chapter. Don't worry; I'll be doing better quality control in the future.
Well that's what I get for putting things off till later. Now I'll never know what this blog was about.
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Heh, nothing much. The passage is now kept in the chapter two author's note, for those who want to see what it was.
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Ah, thanks.