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  • 115 weeks
    A Ratio Approaching One and G5 - Ideas and Feedback Requested

    In an earlier post, years ago by now I am certain, I discussed some other story ideas I wanted to try out. One of these was what I called "A Ratio Approaching One," where certain scenes/episodes of FiM were re-imagined in an Equestria where the ratio of mares to stallions was closer to 1:1. A different take from the usual Rule 63 story where it's all flipped for everyone. The main point was to

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  • 244 weeks
    Brief History and MLP Canon

    In my last blog, I discussed how one of the (many) reasons the fics sort of went to sleep was due to both lagging behind the show, and not knowing how to continue with my intent of being canon compliant even as the show became more and more specific. So, now that I've seen Season 7 (with 8 and 9 when I can later), I will make this official: The fics A Brief History of Equestria and Brief History

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  • 244 weeks
    Lots Of Dust In Here...

    So. Been a while. Lots of reasoning for it: Work, writers block, and outside factors keeping me from keeping up with the show (I have only just now managed to watch Season 7 - sooo no spoilers please). You know, the usual.

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  • 510 weeks
    Some Assistence...

    No. No new snippet.

    However, I have been psyching myself up to get back into writing the Assault.

    One bit in particular is inspired by this song here:

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  • 543 weeks
    Season Four Premier

    Welp... The two-parter has thrown all manner of monkey wrenches into my plans. Not enough to induce a rage quit, but definitely a frustrating thing. I had heard the rumors of the history of Tia and Luna being explored, but no where near as much as what was shown.

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Some Assistence... · 12:46am Jul 15th, 2014

No. No new snippet.

However, I have been psyching myself up to get back into writing the Assault.

One bit in particular is inspired by this song here:

The Lone Forty. Forty of the best warriors in the army. Earth Pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, doesn't matter. With the Fall of Celestine and the Republic army gutted, Star-Burst ordered for a consolidated defense around Canterlot. However, Talonhoof's horde of Mongrels and Griffons is highly mobile, so they need to slow them down as much as possible to buy time to both set up siege defenses, and train every able and unable mare, stallion and foal to fight tem off. So he asks for volunteers to agro the enemy at as many chock points as possible, and die doing it for as long as possible.

Hence the Lone Forty.

So far I got... Four.

Eisen Heart. Basically? The Viking at Stamford Bridge.

Soldier. Mother to a murdered daughter, wife to a murdered husband, and she will have her vengeance. With the Fall of Celestine, her whole family was wiped out in minutes. Giving up her identity, she will kill and kill and kill every Diamond Dog, Griffon, and whatever else the Horde has until she's dead, and then she'll kill some more.

Prisma Chromatic. The only one of the 40 whose body was never found.

Sugar: Pony!Simo Hayha. Pegasus stallion. Quiet, unassuming type, deadly with a crossbow.

So... I'd appreciate a few ideas folks. NOT HERE! Please submit them in a PM

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Comments ( 6 )

40? Why 40? The Lone Forty doesn't really have that much of a ring to it...

2436418 Listen to the lyrics of the song I embedded.

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Well if the song is the inspiration... you still looking for characters?

Have you gotten the forty that you wanted? If not, I suggest posting another blog. Or maybe posting a forum discussion in the Writer's Group or the World Building Alliance.

How goes work with the Lone 40? Are you in need of any more suggestions?

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